|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|bountiful are the seeds of trust.
a truly penetrating write, richard.
very, very much enjoyed.
peace + blessings,
|Reviewed by Z McClure
|this is a very dynamic and inspiring write! It has been cut and polished and it sparkles!! The photo is just right,also.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|alot of skill in this write. Pleasant to read. The strength, the strength we hope we can dig deep and find. ~ MM|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|I admire your skill with tankas, Richard, in this beautifully
rendered acknowlegement of how we got to harvest the the fruits
from the seeds planted in the past. -gene.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|WELL DONE...PERFECT TANKAS WITH COMPLETE PHRASES AND IN A STORY LINE THAT ENHANCES THE BEAUTY OF THEM. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Another poem that leaves me breathless
GREAT closing line!!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Well written indeed dear man...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|History is an amazing place to visit to learn and understand how it was before we came along. Generations who were spiritual strong and stood up for what they believed. Well said...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|a fine tribute to the scandanavian wayfarers of old, the boundless determination of the human spirit, that voice which quests for truth, knowing inside that the earth is not flat.|
|Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
|Encourages me to a find in my backyard. I really believe there is oil.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
A beautifully written noble tribute to adventurers,
seekers and finders, hunters and planters,
men and women of good intentions.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I have a vision of the first to conquer these wild lans. Am I right?
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Brilliant style, not to mention wonderful line of thought so rich in meaning!
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|You had me by the first verse, Richard. In it, you really capture that adventure-seeking side of us that seeks to have experiences beyond our parents; a moment for our own individuality to grow and shine. I think that feeling becomes more soul-driven as time passes. But really your poem is a journey and it continues...the struggle, the lessons. We are ill-prepared at best:) Great sense of hope at the end of this, too, like one leaving behind a legacy. Much enjoyed, my friend. Love and hugs,
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|WOW! great one Richard...and just how I feel my life is at the moment; of course,not so physically difficult :-)
The photo is really beautiful.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Sounds to me like "they" lived life to the fullest of "their" abilities...e|