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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
5/19/2012 |
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| The "gentle breather" as I noted in a previous review, you have a gentle style,limpid without sentimentality. And... you have a handle on the answer: "All life is mixed between the us and the not us." Rich. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/4/2012 |
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| Exquisite poem Lonnie. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/30/2011 |
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Be a gentle breather
not the badly rough.
Great counsel to bring peace and harmony, Lonnie. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Donna Chandler |
7/29/2011 |
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Be a gentle breather ...... what a beautiful thought. I like that idea a lot!
Donna |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/28/2011 |
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The final lines stir me, Lonnie,
and i'd love to follow their positive message
and indeed the point of view of the whole work.
The writing is delicate but not frail, in-touch,
not cold and distant...you are connected and aware.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
7/28/2011 |
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This is truly amazing, like shelter for the soul of the reader.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/28/2011 |
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| This flows beautifully, with a sting of a good message..great work! |
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