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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
9/4/2012 |
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| Remaining aware of sentient gifts--nurturing them, avoiding any weakness of a damage-driven-ego vying for self destruction either through self-loathing and or altered states of consciousness to escape or get attention--this piece jumps off the page with High of an inquisitive mind, a mind that is ready to fire up upon rising, imagine and make his or her own reality. Loved the subtextual energy in this. |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
8/11/2012 |
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Thank you, Asa, for sharing your beauty in words of art..Such a pleasure to read your work. You're very talented. I hope you know this.
God bless you always and in all ways..
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| Reviewed by Vicky Semones |
8/8/2012 |
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Mom, the images are amazingly appropriate to each poem. Asa, we are all imprisoned within ourselves, until we deeply surrender to the 'one' Divine energy that supersedes each of mankind's constructions. It is in each of us and is every one of us. You have the vision. Believe in your soul. Do not measure yourself by the world's expectations.
Blessings, Vicky |
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| Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen |
5/17/2012 |
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A vision within the bounds of the earth, with a mind, heart and soul,
that is boundless, Your expression here Asa, is truely an insight from within, and can only be seen by one who dwells in its depth and forms his expression from the clay entwined with its roots. Beautiful work!
Namaste'
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| Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson |
4/29/2012 |
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Asa,
You need a spanking. Mama, Spank his b------. You are so talented. The imagery is unbelieviable. There are no impossible dreams. |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
4/20/2012 |
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| As I also felt this, so lovely... I like this vision. :) |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/15/2012 |
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| TO DARE TO DREAM IMPOSSIBLE DREAMS IS THE BEGINNING OF WALKING BY FAITH...NOT BY SIGHT. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
3/23/2012 |
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| Glorious vision shared!!! xox :-) |
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| Reviewed by Ruan Burke |
3/13/2012 |
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| It is in the poet's skill to portray such a ambience as this. You have that skill,Asa. It shows in every word. It would be great to see you published. |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
3/12/2012 |
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| He's brought the sun a little nearer today with this upside down poem that works beautifully and illustrates the excellent maxim, KISS, keep it simple, stupid! Hope the clouds roll by soon for Asa! |
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
3/5/2012 |
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| Lovely description. Sometimes the sea becomes the sky or a mountain vanishes into a cloud. thank you for reading my poem. Rainbows |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/17/2011 |
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You have the walking on clouds.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
9/12/2011 |
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| Superb. To feel what one sees and be able to articulate it in such a lucid way is a gift worth keeping. |
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| Reviewed by Daniel Keith |
9/11/2011 |
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Keep the hopes and the dreams alive Asa. Well written. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel |
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| Reviewed by Clarence Prince |
9/9/2011 |
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| "Dream Vision" indeed, Joyce! Yet it's lovely, there should be blessings coming for Asa, soon! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/29/2011 |
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| a wonderful vision indeed! |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
8/28/2011 |
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| There is much depth in Asa's poem! His imagery produces visions that can be crafted into individual ideas and thoughts....M |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/23/2011 |
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Deep words of purity unfolding like a delicate flower....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
8/23/2011 |
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Exceptional poetry from the heart. Keep on writing poems like these for you never know the life you will touch.
Yours in the love of Christ,
John Michael Domino |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/23/2011 |
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| "dream vision" is opening the door that unlocks all possibilities -- imagination and creativity flow in endless streams from that portal -- Asa, your expression captures that moment of personal enlightenment quickly, poetically -- I bid you peace -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/22/2011 |
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| ..this brings me to tears..WOW! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/22/2011 |
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Asa,
I love the directness of this poem. Very nicely written!
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Glen Manese |
8/22/2011 |
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| Liked how the last line fits everything into unison... Of course...I see what I feel... The picture sets this off in motion... Thanks for sharing... |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/22/2011 |
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From the heart and soul of a poet comes writing such as this...to inspire and tweak the imagination! Creative and uplifting! Well done, Asa! Never let the ink in your quill dry up! You are a wonderful writer!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
8/20/2011 |
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| so much said in lines that flow and are as uplifting as the warm light. Thanks for sharing. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
8/20/2011 |
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Wonderfully written poetry indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/20/2011 |
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You help us to venture forth today with understanding and vision ~
Wonderful poem!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/20/2011 |
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| Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/20/2011 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL, TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
8/19/2011 |
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Very good...I really like this piece Asa.
Blessings,
ann |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
8/19/2011 |
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Asa wrote a short but very sweet piece here. I would like for him to publish his poetry. He certainly has the talent for it.
GOD BLESS YOU, Joyce, and Asa too.
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/19/2011 |
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Nicely done, Asa. I can relate to what you have shared through your verses here. Thank you and thank you, Joyce for sharing this. Love and peace and blessings,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/19/2011 |
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Asa,
You have that quick and direct way of catching
and holding the reader...words, mood
and point of view penetrate and stay.
Thank you, Joyce, for sharing with us.
John |
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