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Mindless
by Pia Shannon
Monday, August 29, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.

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we live in a timeless trap of repetitive thinking always the same old stuff

Mindless

A smile haunts

The defences

Letting the light in

Dusted and worn

Are the thoughts that

Hover -

Tattered over time

Dragging the senses

Mindless and aimless

Clinging to the edges

Repetitive and soulless

Ignorant of reason.

Pia

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Reviewed by James Munro	8/29/2011

This is a very sad poem, but as a poem it works, it conveys a lot of feeling in a few words. I like it.

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