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  World Full of Clones
by Elisabeth Barstowe
Saturday, December 31, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.

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in a stormy sea of suppressed suppression.
A metamorphosis of sorts,
control freakish and paranoid.
Paraplegic and tongue-tied.
And so I sit yet this one out.

Ribbons tied to my heartstrings,
much to heavy they weigh.
Curveballs thrown to many,
when all I asked for was them straight.

These crooked traits
have turned Dire Straits,
still  foolishness prevails.

What is this need to quench,
I ask.
Can you not let me stand tall
and proud?

If I intimidate,
if I'm cause for debate.
Then why,
I ask.

All I want is to be me,
you don't have to
can't you see?

I never asked for a world full of clones,
but you treat it as that,
and so we' are a world full of clowns.

Many perilous roads have I wandered
to come to here.
And now it seems I have many left.

My peace of mind is somehow threatening
and need to be disposed.

And you,
all of you,
do this by choice.
How can I turn this around?
Do I need to be like you,
for you to respect me to?

If you think yourself diminished by me
that's just from your point of view you see.

I never once said anything of the sort
not to you, not to your back, not ever.
To me you are all equal, beautiful,
and infinitely clever.
Just a little scared....
Just a little scared....

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Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 1/1/2012
I love this moving and insightful and deep poem.
Hugs from
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 12/31/2011
Deep, probing and scary piece of work here, Elisabeth. Deep because you delved into the inner sanctum of the reader, a place where they might not feel comfortable going. Probing because of the questions you asked and the seemingly inability of receiving answers. And scary because of it deep, probing nature.

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  2. Words Will Never Express How Lucky I am to
  3. Love is Like a Flower
  4. Water Kinda Runnin' Kinda Dim
  5. A Little Drop of Rain
  6. A Poem In MInd
  7. Withdrawn...
  8. Ominous
  9. Hands On Arms Around
  10. distant drama and mended wounds
  11. You Donít Know Me
  12. The Liar
  13. It's Simple
  14. Blood Of A Slave, Heart Of A King
  15. Facing the fuure
  17. Blessed
  18. association
  19. A Husband, A Father & Friend
  20. Freedom of Speech

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