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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
8/18/2012 |
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Oh so much more ahead! It never stops! In another lifetime you will find the familiar.
Love ya!!!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
3/27/2012 |
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| I like Janna Hill's take; observing downward. Rousing lines, "I thought by now/I'd be quite dead/" A jingle of a little astonishment. |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
2/29/2012 |
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| This poem reads consistent with the philosophy of your "Love Shards", allowing the aging process to remain positive, to see that living life fully is sometimes a case of reinvention, and other times just a willingness to simply turn the coin over and accept the alternative. Would you live the same nightmares? Perhaps not, but most likely you would find new ones, given your propensity for embracing change in your life. A free verse of perplexing questions for us all to reflect on. Thank you for presenting the idea of choice living on as we age. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
2/27/2012 |
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Looking back to change be not necessary
*Jerry* we are who we are today because
our past is ever present for the present
and future incorporated into oneness!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
2/27/2012 |
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| oh, heck tomorrow is another set of choices .....with the lack of plenty of good info, research, and or speculation. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
2/27/2012 |
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| Life is so interesting as is this poem. BTW I'll be getting a tatoe done soon. Knew I would not do it until I found the right one. |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
2/27/2012 |
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I like that you "look down" indicating you are at a higher place of observation... waiting to turn the next page.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
2/27/2012 |
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I don't suppose there's a human being alive who'd say if they could do it again they wouldn't change a thing! I know I can't say that...lots to chew on in this one, Jerry! Well done!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
2/26/2012 |
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Jerry,
Fascinating and well written as always. I guess we never know when our time is up.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/26/2012 |
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| reflective to the core ... |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
2/26/2012 |
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it's a fine way to reflect on yesterday's gone bye, but as your poem suggests, while we're here now, we'd best drink to marrow... here's to the meat on them bones, matey...
Your friend,
Jolly Roger |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
2/26/2012 |
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Jerry, we all wonder the same things, but now is the time to live. You have a second chance to live a joyful life, and you know this. Let the past go, and revel in the present...don't worry about the future it will come nothing you can do about that, but enjoy what you have in the moment and know it's so beautiful just to be alive.
Great thought provoking poetry....
Peace, love, and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/26/2012 |
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| Don't we all ask these questions...? Yes, I think u would live your life the same if u had the chance to do it all again...too much fun not too...e |
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