|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Interesting and understandable reaction. Love the construction.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Your words are so musical and lithe, they send me dancing!
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|CYNTHIA FLINGS HIS HALF HEARTED EFFORT BACK IN HIS FACE AND TELLS HIM HOW WEAK AND GULLIBLE HE HAS BECOME TO WANTONESS. SAD AND WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Kind words could prevail with me by and by,
if true deeds and acts to them you did tie.
Or would true colours, your kind words extort?
... therein lies the conundrum right at the turn of the sonnet, as you might expect, and central to the dynamics of a shifting-sands relationship. Remorse, repentence or regret? How will she ever know... they might all be crocodile tears. But Cynthia is starting to get beneath this thick skin, methinks... uncovering, perhaps, a toad...! :)) xx
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I feel I am in a Shakespearian play, Cynthia is getting stronger, she will prevail, her cynicism is definitely growing..
Nice one, my friend, some more please....
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your sonnet awakens thought and emotion, Roger. I'd like to meet Cynthia. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Enough to set my alarm *Roger* for the
next wake up of your growing sonnets!!
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Your sonnet is strong and intense. Cynthia's got his shirt tail!
Very well done Roger
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Deeply layered imagery envelops this sonnet, addressing an awakening in this relationship, hopefully to lead onward to consolation ...|
|Reviewed by * Starman * *
|Wales and Prince Charles could not court a better princely piece than this.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Uh, I do believe that Cynthia has delivered to Todd, in no uncertain runarounds, the facts of life. . . er . . . sonnet . . . to the brash and delusional young man.|