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A long awaited meeting finally happens.
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Alas my eyes behold thee
Our love, our souls complete
Within us love is surging
Thy beauty within reach
A moment’s gaze while standing
Take hand, unuttered speech
Lead mine to love in paradise
From thy yard by common street
Thy pause within thy doorway
Locked eyes as lips first meet
Joined hearts accelerate in pace
Love explodes with passions peak
Entwined our love fulfilling
First our passion shared on feet
Share with mine eternity
Sweetest tears forever keep
Loves perfection flowing
As we lay in passions heat
Look into the eyes of love
Mine soul thy life does seek
Our lives adjoined in oneness
Fires climax seen within deep
Pleasures rage as not before
As our perfect love released
Hold me close this moment
Mine will never leave thy side
No space, no time can part us
Though mine parts with morrows tide
Not yet, our time together
For our secret love thy hide
Until our time of joining
With thy wishes mine abide
Nov 16th
©Copyright 2010 by Ed J
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| Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) |
8/20/2012 |
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A beautiful poem but not with the deep passionate love I saw in the ones you wrote for the other woman. But, still emotionally written Ed
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
5/23/2012 |
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| LOVELY! PASSION IN THE BEAUTY OF PURITY. WELL DONE, ED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
4/20/2012 |
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| This was also a beautiful memory :) |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
4/18/2012 |
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Passionate, beautiful love poem
Angel |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/14/2012 |
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Passionate reflections in a King James style.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/12/2012 |
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A really good love poem.
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| Reviewed by Donna Chandler |
4/12/2012 |
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A poem of love and passion and 'secrets'.
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/12/2012 |
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| a beautiful write! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/11/2012 |
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Ed, you finally have returned! What a poem, so passionate and alive, absence did make the heart grow fonder..Lovely poetry, good to see you back..
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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