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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
12/12/2012 |
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| Fra-ranging love poem! A coast to coast, continent to continent voyage amour. |
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| Reviewed by Paddy Bostock |
10/21/2012 |
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If only love alone could solve our problems--if only! But politicians and bankers don't see it that way. Where money's to be made, the rest of us can expect the worst. Yes, we should be together, but how many obstacles-sorry about this, but primarily religions-have for so long managed to separate us?
A heartfelt poem, Regis! Hope the girl comes home from the north and brings with her the rain. |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
9/24/2012 |
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Nothing stops true love
hug
Kat |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/20/2012 |
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| Great insite and description of the world we live in. Love can cross mountain and plain and even extend to heaven if it's strong enough.....M |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
9/12/2012 |
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| And THIS is why I am so happy to be back here.. to read words such as these that wrap me in a warm blanket of companionship and understanding..)) love to you, my friend.. Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
7/19/2012 |
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this poem is a hug for the weary in a world going mad.
Beautiful summaries of what's wrong, topped by the one good and right thing.
Ends on a most encouraging line!
~Zach |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
7/14/2012 |
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| "Love is the best shelter" is the message you are conveying in this message and you have put it in the most brilliant way a poet can ever portray the magestic powers of love. Have missed you sooooooo much my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
7/9/2012 |
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A protective balm awaits when the "for we are together" becomes
real. A powerful write of reality.... |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/9/2012 |
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| WORLD CONDITIONS THAT EXIST WHILE TWO ARE SEPARATED CARRIES AN ADDITIONAL 'STRAIN' BECAUSE OF THE DISTANCE BETWEEN THEM. AND SO IT IS...THOUGH THE CHAOTIC CONDITIONS OF THE WORLD WILL NOT CHANGE...THE 'STRAIN' WILL BE ALLEVIATED WHEN THE TWO ARE REUNITED. THE GIST; TWO HEARTS ARE BETTER THAN ONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/3/2012 |
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| Wonderful heart felt poem. Raven's are misunderstood; they are not the bad omens they have been made out to be but can be the joker. If a raven has crossed your path, 3 times even better, the raven is bringing magic, shapeshifting and creation into your awareness. BTW thanks for being the great friend that you have been to me....just by being there even when I disapppear for weeks, months and etc. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
6/21/2012 |
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Reg,
Great write.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
6/20/2012 |
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| Oh, exquisite! Powerful!!! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/14/2012 |
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Beautifully genuine insights, Regis, and may you be happy and blessed!
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
6/14/2012 |
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Evermore to love each other.
Excellent write Regis.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
6/13/2012 |
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| this proves the power of love, for in its arms, no matter whatever else is happening in the world, we are safe and sound. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/11/2012 |
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| It's strange how we can be extra sensitive to the world's travails when lost in the ardour of passionate love - and yet also immune from its consequences by the power of that same love. You have spoken of such most eloquently and elegantly here, Regis. Thank you for sharing its effects so warmly. May you both continue to be richly blessed. xx |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
6/10/2012 |
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I think this one may be your very best poem ever...but if not then it is for sure one of your best...I love the fast tempo and rhythm of it and I would love to hear it read out loud as it flowed so perfectly.Love to you and yours
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
6/10/2012 |
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| ...this speaks to the need to strengthen what remains in light of so much destruction and decay, and the tone of an effigy fading in the twilight of tomorrow's sorrow lends the vestigial effulgence of a peaceful legacy that outlasts the relationship rejoinder to close your verse... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/10/2012 |
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There is such urgency in our world to see the beauty, when there is so much sickness, your words pierce Reg
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
6/10/2012 |
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Regis, you have profoundly described the importance of personal
relationships, love, and our ties as sucklings of mother earth - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/10/2012 |
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It's so true that everything looks bleaker when the one we love is not close...beautifully penned, Regis! Lots of dark truths here...
Anna |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
6/9/2012 |
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| Very differently written but very interesting ....when together, chaos hardly matters....veryyyyy beautiful..best wishes,neerja :))))))) |
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| Reviewed by Micki Peluso |
6/9/2012 |
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Regis, a bit different than your usual but I really love it!! wonderful imagery.
Micki |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/9/2012 |
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i like the global picture here,
Regis, the broad perspective and the concern for
all that's not well - you see true and
you think big - admirable indeed
john |
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| Reviewed by Morgan McFinn |
6/9/2012 |
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That we are together...For we are together
I'm with you, Regis...to hell with everything in between those two lines. Aren't we lucky!!!
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
6/9/2012 |
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| yes a partner in crime is the way to go, and such lovely lines as ....that the moon is not rising twighlight is dark and the skies weep. this poem is so well put together |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
6/9/2012 |
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It surely makes a difference when two are as one.
The wistful beauty of the closing lines softens the harshness of life.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
6/9/2012 |
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| Regis, you found a very provocative and effective way to point out the current woes of the world, and how a private love can tune it all out to the point where there are only two timeless souls and nothing else. Well done. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
6/9/2012 |
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Love so endearing *Regis*
of heart and soul rendering
from love at it's best!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/9/2012 |
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| Nicely done Regis. There is a lot of good and evil on this planet, hard to say which is winning, but it matters not. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/9/2012 |
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Reg,
Love holds no boundaries, as evident from your poem. All hell can break loose, but love will prevail..Boy us romantics need to get a grip..lol
Awesome poetry as always,
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/9/2012 |
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Regardless of what's happening in the world, togetherness knows no bounds. You wrapped up the beginning and the end very nicely.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Christian |
6/9/2012 |
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| I do love a happy ending. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
6/8/2012 |
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Good and bad, ying and yang...........you portray it all here so well!
Love ya!
Jane
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/8/2012 |
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Regis,
So happy to read this lovely tribute of yours, thank you again
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
6/8/2012 |
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Because I can not say it any better than she did I will quote Emily Dickinson with one of my all-time favorite lines:
"All I Know Of Love
Is That Love Is All There Is."
Beautiful poem, Reg.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/8/2012 |
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This gives such a view as it is, how the world stands... ah but to know there is that one that when you hold them in your arms you are together. And among all the chaos the world has, isn't this the most beautiful thing.
Beauty among the chaos, and then you will be one again, how lovely
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/8/2012 |
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Wonderful; c'est magnifique, mon ami!
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/8/2012 |
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| So true that the world revolves around love when love is your whole world...e |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/8/2012 |
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Very, very nice, Regis.
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
6/8/2012 |
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| oh regis this is so incredibly good...maybe my favorite of much of your work. i can't keep from re reading the last 5 lines...outstanding...pat |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/8/2012 |
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| beautiful write! |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/8/2012 |
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Truly a Heartfelt write so meaningful and beautiful Laura
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/8/2012 |
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| Sounds like you've got a great handle on just what is important in your life. Well said. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/8/2012 |
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Yep, it is summer, climate does tend to warm up.
About the rest of you in-you-face poem, Regis, I with you. Mankind, supposedly more intelligent are killing each other in the most gruesome ways. I love your poem, and especially the last three line. |
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| Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo |
6/8/2012 |
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Wow! What a poem! So meaningful and deep. Thanks for sharing.
When we are together with the one we love things seem to fall into place and it all seems to be the way it should be. Nothing seems wrong or bad because we are together and always have each other no matter what.
Just one thing I noticed... "that a raven calls his dark shadow passes over me" - i would say 'passing over me' instead of 'passes over me'. |
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