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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
10/3/2012 |
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Life is beautiful when you are held in the arms of the one you love. You cover every possible emotion and direction here for that kind of love
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| Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) |
6/18/2012 |
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We giggle both together
As we slowly both undress
And hold each other closely
My lover and best friend
Your words the way you write of a wonderful relationship. We all dream of this beauty Lily
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
6/13/2012 |
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Beauty in the morning's tenderness. Lovely poetry Lily.
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| Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) |
6/13/2012 |
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But the tenderness of two who know true love for that each can so peacefully slumber in each others arms. Then only to wake and continue that beauty.
I bow and tip my hat to you
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| Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader) |
6/12/2012 |
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There is nothing more beautiful Lily, I had 50 wonderful years with my husband and you write of someone you love very deeply.
Edith |
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| Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) |
6/12/2012 |
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I don't think life could be more beautiful in the way you have described this. It is what everyone aspires for in life, to find that special person you can call your own and enjoy the simple pleasures of life.
Beautiful
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
6/11/2012 |
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| ....life can be beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/11/2012 |
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| a wonderful communion of souls .... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/11/2012 |
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| Sounds like a truly marvelous place to be. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/11/2012 |
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a sharing, Lily, of natural intimacy
and relaxed togetherness - the very best
kind of togetherness with no pressure
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| Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen |
6/11/2012 |
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Beautifully penned Carolee. The greatest gift bestowed to us is love, and you so tenderly tell of its magnificiance.
Thanks for the reflection from your heart.
Peace and Love forever
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
6/10/2012 |
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Your words describe true love! What a treasure it is!!
Love ya!
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
6/10/2012 |
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Carol, Lovingly words describing romance before and after...
Always,
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/10/2012 |
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Lily,
So beautiful is this poem that makes this reader's heart flutter a bit. You have described soul mate love and contentment.
Lovely work as always,
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
6/10/2012 |
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| The comfort and trust in this is radiant. Thank you for sharing the intimacy. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/10/2012 |
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Lily,
This wonderfully complete love you have so tenderly described needs no other to follow, it lasts a life time.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
6/10/2012 |
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The title says it all already.
How beautiful it is when love is so natural, nothing is needed, while everything can. Even time disappears.
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful view Carolee |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/10/2012 |
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| A truly great feeling you have described Carol, when you can lay together, fully clothed and talk, watch TV and drop off to sleep. That is a very satisfying feeling. I have been there and the peace it gives you is indescribable. Beautiful work. |
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