by Teresa M Walker
Monday, June 18, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Falling in love for the first time!
Moved by loves smile, I met you,
In your arms I feel complete,
Everyday a new day dawning,
Anticipating the time we meet.
One look at you my heart throbs deeply,
A smile from you, I felt love grow,
A word from you, my mind stores treasure,
Forever you, I hope to know.
My body awakened, from a time of deep sleep,
In search of this nectar, to feel complete,
Finding and tasting ambrosias desert,
Cautious and willing, not wanting to hurt.
Anxiously waiting the next time we meet,
One look, one touch, one kiss as we greet,
Time has no end, as we do this together,
Hoping and praying, this love lasts forever.
© By Teresa Bellamy Walker
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|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Beautiful and romantic to forever love to be.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|<3 Love your closing prose den sister
"Time has no end, as we do this together"
Slow Dancing by Candlelight
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can completely relate to what you have expressed through your verses, Teresa. Such love is a precious gift, so much so that, sometimes, I begin to worry about something going amiss. Mind you, I've always been a bit of a pessimist. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Asa Seeley
|a 'place'...we never forget. thanks for the share
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The anticipation of new love is always the strongest, as your poem so beautifully describes. Let's hope it lasts a lifetime.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
beautiful sentiment here is hoping for the forever.