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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/26/2012 |
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How absolutely beautiful vision Jerry.
"for she is your adytum
her face sacred, her
body a shrine of bliss
these wonderful trysts
are sweet to the bone
still, leaving us pseudo
fulfilled, wanting more
not now, maybe never
these few minutes of
love sharing is precious"
So wonderful these lines on how she encapsulates you, yet she is your adytum a most sacred place not to be entered and only leaving you pseudo filled. Ah but how precious to revel in this, to just share the moment, a beautiful dream brought to reality of your mind. While sharing in kindred romanticism...
Just a beautiful vision Jerry :)
Love and Light
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/26/2012 |
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A remarkable write Laura
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/26/2012 |
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Nicely done, Jerry...Love the title!
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
6/25/2012 |
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Perhaps not fallen...just eclipsed,
beauty none the less *Jerry*
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/25/2012 |
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A nice juxtaposition: fall/sun. Somehow you have included a mysterious distant love in it as well. Kudos.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
6/25/2012 |
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| Interesting approach to object oriented love. For me, even greater significance when substituting "she" with "it," allowing the "state of love" to transcend the object of love. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
6/25/2012 |
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Such compelling magnetism and eminent passion! Whew!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/25/2012 |
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Simply the most stunning poem you have written! I love the presentation and your romantic soul.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/25/2012 |
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Jerry,
It is not only she who takes the chances, you risk you heart as well.
Budd |
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