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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
7/17/2012 |
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a beautiful dance & rhythm!!!
Ride Those Waves!!
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/3/2012 |
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You express so much via your verses here, Shirley; such powerful, evocative words that awaken meaning and emotion. To me, your words are witness that you can easily "stand on your own." Still, it is wonderful to have someone "good and true" by one's side. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/1/2012 |
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| For me this was a ride on an airstream of energy. I enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme; and your choice of words was whirling. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
6/29/2012 |
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| Wonderful sentiments here and in the end an affirmation that everyone needs someone. Your writing is becoming more and more grounded without losing it ability to soar. Like that. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/29/2012 |
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Powerful, love the ending..your breath is mine..breathe, beautiful~
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/29/2012 |
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...but to add to Budd's comment, if we find then lose our soulmate...what is the sense in breathing.
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/28/2012 |
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Shirley,
Jerry has already quoted it correctly. We do need our soulmate above all else we do and will continue to seek them until melded together.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
6/28/2012 |
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Accolades in prisms of light to you Shirley.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/28/2012 |
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| FANtastic write. You are good. Better than good. Quoting an old rock 'n roll title now, You are "Some Kind of Wonderful." Yes! |
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