|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Who wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of such emotional bliss! Lovely write, Jerry!
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|I can't think of any woman that would not love to have such words and feelings written for them.... This should be in a Hallmark card..
Beautiful piece of writing, Jerry
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I see a dam giving way!
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Songs of my heart..beautiful serenity poem of love ~Jerry~
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|I can see your beautiful
for a meaning worthwhile
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Just imagine, all your stored up love that you have held within your soul... imagine... throughout your entire wait that "long time coming" finally arrives. Just imagine Jerry, how blessed this fair lady would be to have you embellish it all upon her... All the wonderful beautiful songs that you have held within your heart and soul... to even cherish this fortunate lady as you describe "I sense serenity
I see a goddess astride her steed
it is you
as I always knew it would be
please accept all this pent-up love"
How absolutely wonderful it would be, it would be heaven for you, but not only you her as well. :)
Beautiful Jerry, absolutely beautiful.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Perhaps this piece is exploring the maxim: when the student is ready the teacher will appear. We sometimes forget that love comes in lessons we often ignore, even when they are most apparent. Still, the sense of "unused" is a haunting concern for those of us who at one time or another were ready but the teacher/love did not appeared. Hang in there. The brain and heart work in concert and sooner or later what appears dissonant now will harmonize.|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|"no matter our love is unorthodox" Unorthodox??? You mean there are rules? Now's a fine time for me to be finding that out.... Where were you when I was in my fifty's and early 60's?
All kidding aside, another nice one Jerry. Dick
|Reviewed by FRANK UNDERWRITTEN
|... you better knock, knock, knock... on wood! Would you now? Truly wooed, Jerry... I hear you knocking...
I like the line about the "pent-up love" ... good one...
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
hope there is the knock at the door and she accepts that precious gift.