|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|No wonder there are so many comments to this writing. Its very brevity is its substance. I truly appreciate this piece, all of it. There is hugeness to the concepts of: "divided but not apart" "....sins undefined" (that one is loaded with layers upon layers); and "heart purgatory," is about the best way I've ever seen heartache written down for the reading. "pretending to breathe" carries an essence of suffocation that can be felt just looking at those three words. Immaculate poetry in my eyes, Fee. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Duke LaRance
|So much said with so few words...perfect....|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Dark & deep, dude...e|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Loved the contrast, but so sad!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the way you put this together!|
|Reviewed by Shirley Houston
|This touched my soul. How sad the place where love is no longer alive!|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Reviewed by jude forese
|faith and hope keeps us moving on ... you poem's finale captures the essence of for a way to escape the pain as we endure it ...|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|This is wonderful Felix, There's a shiver within your words. Great write.
Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|And sometimes the differences a insurmountable....beautifully penned, Fee...
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|Very traumatic words, Felix|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Expressionist you are to capture this light and dark
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Stark and real. Very moving, Fee.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I get a great deal out of reading these words because what they express is familiar to me. Thank you. I also wonder as to why you don't deem me worthy of a comment or two from you on the "stuff" that I share. Thank you for sharing, Fee. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Oh, how I know that dark place! Light a candle!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Makes me think of a teeter-totter, trying so desperately to find a balance, that seems so difficult to do..sad poem~
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
It is my profound hope this is of the muse and not personal, you should be in the light..always.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A Deeply moving write Laura
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Opposites attract. It's in our genetic makeup. Civilization is spent a lot of time and effort trying to deny it, but it cannot be denied. Viva la difference!
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Fee, as long as we are still "Looking for a sign" there is reason for optimism, the breeding place for hope and expectation. Dick|
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|a felt edge to this velvet verse... torrid and terse... like an anguished curse... put upon to rehearse... drenched in heavy darkness, alighting to rehearse... the same surly dreams... light and dark intersperse...
A rich poem, Fee...
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|Hope..the reason to go on...I read somewhere, I agree :) best wishes|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Dark. I like dark. You put this together as perhaps you are living it. Hoping for better days if that is so, Felix.|