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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/3/2012 |
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Amen...regrets...we've all got' em...but they can be a heavy load if we carry them each and every moment we're alive.....gotta put 'em where they belong.....in the past....
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/2/2012 |
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Aw, hell yeah!!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/2/2012 |
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Run your races to win *Jerry*
looking straight ahead for
looking back only slows you
down...You can do it!!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
7/2/2012 |
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Jerry,
I think many if not all of us have regrets, things we wish we had done differently are not at all. Thought provoking write~!
Blessings,
+Linda |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/2/2012 |
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| I appreciate the temperament contrast between the first two lines and the subsequent four. Powerful juxtaposition in so placing them. Strong piece of poetry. ~~ DIana |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/2/2012 |
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| And yet, the fact that this wordsmithing of an observation exists subliminally purports that the highway is endless. Like the life it metaphorically portrays, there are side roads we occasionally take, but they too inevitably lead back to the main road. It takes some courage sometimes to get back in the fast lane. Congrats. Hold onto that rabbit's foot. |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/2/2012 |
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I have had regrets to my friend a great and meaningful write as always Laura
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/2/2012 |
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Sure, but poignantly direct.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/2/2012 |
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| It is our regrets that give us strength to travel down those roads~(trials and tribulations can make us stronger) |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/2/2012 |
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You are so inspiring Jerry, many have run races won and lost, but in the end you still triumph! For if you do not enter the race you will never know... :)
Love this
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/2/2012 |
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Jerry,
You have more races to run and win my friend, Shake your fist keep on writing. You inspire us all.
Budd |
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