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Victoria Randall

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Stranger
by Victoria Randall
Tuesday, July 03, 2012
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 I met him on the beach

on a cold September morn,

when the waves were hissing fingers 

and the sun an ancient coin.

 

He held me close to keep me warm

and we watched a far white sail.

He is all my heart could wish for,

if it weren't for his fish's tail.

 

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/12/2012
Nice twist aat the end. Thank you for sharing, Victoria. Love and best wishes,d

Regis
Reviewed by Shirley Houston 7/5/2012
Love!!
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 7/4/2012
Concise condensation of the romance formula. I really like "and we watched a far white sail." That line holds enomous depth. And your last line sums up the human condition. Very sharp awareness writing. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/4/2012
Very romantic, right down to the end. ;-) I'm sure it was just a Man o' Tea. For a 2-fer.

Ron
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/4/2012
Nice twist on the classic mermaid tale of man being enchanted by a mermaid siren on the sea or beside it...simple but well done.
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