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Chasing An Attribute by George Carroll Tuesday, July 10, 2012 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Thoughts that bug you
Chasing an attribute That lingered in my mind. Only to catch it Entwined in my thoughts. Listing like a ship, It weighed that heavy On a mind barely able To right its state of being. Yet subliminal flashes Eased my pondering. And balanced a laden thought, That could undo me.

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Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci	11/29/2012

Yes, I think I know what you mean. It's that thought that's like a butterfly on the edge of a flower which is only there for a moment, but then, it's gone. Love ya! Jane




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	7/13/2012

Thought-provoking words that elicit reflection; thank you, George. Love and blessings, Regis




Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather	7/10/2012

yes, listing, thoughts can do that. Nice write. ~ Morgan




Reviewed by Joyce Bell	7/10/2012

LITTLE BY LITTLE...CHANGE DOES COME. WE CAN HARDLY GET AWAY FROM IT. THANKS FOR SHARING. ENJOYED, GEORGE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH... JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/10/2012

I can truly relate to this, and found it worth saving to read again George. fee




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	7/10/2012

Interesting thoughts :-)




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton	7/10/2012

Sometimes we are guilty of out-thinking ourselves, George, at least I know I have had those embarrassing moments often in my life.