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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/16/2012 |
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A story as old as time....love just happens sometimes...and someone gets hurt.....Nicely done, Jerry.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/14/2012 |
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Each one's life will be altered forever. Love's sorrow!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/11/2012 |
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Jerry,
This kind of torn can be destroying for all three. But it happens to the best of people sometimes.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
7/11/2012 |
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Pistols at dawn. Never fails, unless you're like al quada, or how ever you spell it. They chose to shoot the woman.
It's not a lasses fault if she has men fall in love, yet many lead them on and wonder why they end up looking at a stopped clock, alone. |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
7/11/2012 |
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| An age old painful dilemma...Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/11/2012 |
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I believe this is more common than those that believe in monogamy would care. You conveyed the emotion superbly.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/11/2012 |
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Remembrances of "Torn between two lovers"
*Jerry* singing in your poem....well done
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/11/2012 |
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phew, had me worried a minute ;)
nice form & rhyme .. |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/11/2012 |
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| A gentle pain awakening, perhaps knowing not the duality of the emotion, the transference taking its justifiable place in the iteration of love's fantasy. |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/11/2012 |
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| First dibs! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/11/2012 |
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| Threesomes are a blast...e |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/11/2012 |
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LOL I agree, another Hollywood story, but I think
they have made them already...
I love your imagination, it is what creates our
beautiful prose and poetry!
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
7/11/2012 |
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I hope you're not one "of Two Men"
Nice food for thought |
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