|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|A story as old as time....love just happens sometimes...and someone gets hurt.....Nicely done, Jerry.
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Each one's life will be altered forever. Love's sorrow!
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
This kind of torn can be destroying for all three. But it happens to the best of people sometimes.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Pistols at dawn. Never fails, unless you're like al quada, or how ever you spell it. They chose to shoot the woman.
It's not a lasses fault if she has men fall in love, yet many lead them on and wonder why they end up looking at a stopped clock, alone.
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|An age old painful dilemma...Diana...|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I believe this is more common than those that believe in monogamy would care. You conveyed the emotion superbly.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Remembrances of "Torn between two lovers"
*Jerry* singing in your poem....well done
|Reviewed by jude forese
|phew, had me worried a minute ;)
nice form & rhyme ..
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|A gentle pain awakening, perhaps knowing not the duality of the emotion, the transference taking its justifiable place in the iteration of love's fantasy.|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Threesomes are a blast...e|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|LOL I agree, another Hollywood story, but I think
they have made them already...
I love your imagination, it is what creates our
beautiful prose and poetry!
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|I hope you're not one "of Two Men"
Nice food for thought