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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
9/13/2012 |
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It is despicable that adults are not aware of how this affects their children.
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/17/2012 |
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I feel Your heart light *Carolee*
full of sadness for the children
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/16/2012 |
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You have expressed eloquently a timeless theme of this world/life (sadly), Carolee. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/16/2012 |
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| I remember my parents fighting, tis not a good memory...e |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/15/2012 |
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Yup! The kids see it all, my girl! Each generation becomes so much the wiser! Good stuff!
Love ya!
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/15/2012 |
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A beautiful rendering of a sad subject. I still remember the nights my father would come home drunk and the fight would ensue, going on for some time while my brother and I couldn't sleep in fear that he would come into our room and talk bad again like he always did when he couldn't control his anger about his work.
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Dye |
7/15/2012 |
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| once again it's beautiful poem filled with true emotions keep doing you!!! |
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| Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader) |
7/15/2012 |
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How very sad Lily, that a child should suffer so and the parents do not even realize their own doings
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
7/15/2012 |
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I don't belive anymore can be said to describe the true pain and loss of the many innocent in the fight for power and control of the few. Beautifully crafted poem full of saddening emotions. Wonderful work!
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/15/2012 |
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| So very sad and so very true. good write. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
7/15/2012 |
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| What children hear and see and observe when these slings and arrows are flung and shot are more likely to impress them negatively than any attempt to teach them the Golden Rule. The philosophy of . . . Do as I say, not as I do is a bad road to go down on. |
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| Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) |
7/15/2012 |
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Oh how the little children must suffer dear lady Lily, and sadly how mankind in a word cannot see beyond their own selfishness.
I bow and tip my hat to you
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
7/15/2012 |
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Carol, Ahhh, sounds like my childhood...beautiful, as always. You take your reader into the scene which brings back memories!
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/15/2012 |
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Carolee,
A very intense heartfelt verse about a subject so unsettleing. It is the tiny ones who suffer the most even when the anger is not directly aimed their way. You express it with the love of those who do not even know they need protection.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
7/15/2012 |
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Nothing needs to be said here.
This is what everyone needs to read and take very good notice of.
Beautiful Carolee, touching deeply |
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