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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/6/2012 |
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| Gotta love Felicity's no holds barred approach and I'm glad her feisty words are matched by appropriate actions! Adore your playful use of night sky metaphors, Roger, which are so appropriate for both madness and captivity; love has a way of making us prey to both! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/3/2012 |
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| This has a very classic feel and some incredible smilies and metaphors. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
8/1/2012 |
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I Am SmilIng At The Mooning :)
I mooned Chicago from van one time
It's such fun to be carefree
I enjoyed this poetry flare!!
But better than those roadside flares for sure
What happens to the moon
Remains with the moon
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/30/2012 |
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Welcome back, have missed you and your continuing saga...Another fine installment to this amazing Felicity drama...To taxi cabs and spiteful women, you can never win with either...
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/30/2012 |
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Offensively and defensively..jealousy is a
green eyed monster serving no one well...
Lady Vivian
*Roger* you have the knack for knowing
feelings so well on all accounts.... |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
7/29/2012 |
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| Torn between reality and fantasy; - Ha! - a place I know well. Your eccentric stars are never lacking in drollness my friend. The emotional spaghetti between them is always compelling and never in need of more cheese (the melodramatic). Your determination in this series is impressive, Roger Wayne, not only in the development of these characters, but also in your burgeoning skill in writing sonnets. I salute you! Peace ... richard lloyd |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
7/29/2012 |
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Roger~
Felicity's jealousy will be her demise in Spite.
Fantastic work Roger.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/29/2012 |
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| ...FULL OF SPITE AND IN SPITE OF... THIS IS FELICITY. AND TODD HAS GIVEN HER MUCH FOOD FOR THOUGHTS FROM HIS PAST ACTIONS WITH HER. SO OF COURSE SHE CONSIDERS THE EASE OF HIS ABILITY TO BE UNFAITHFUL. BUT SHE IS FORGETTING SOMETHING; CYNTHIA IS A LADY. I DON'T LIKE FELICITY BUT I LOVE WHAT SHE IS BEGINNING TO DO TO THEIR RELATIONSHIP. THANKS FOR SHARING, ROGER...LOTS OF LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
7/28/2012 |
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| Well done, Roger. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
7/28/2012 |
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| Taking the cab ride with everything condensed to the absolute zero of the moment. Salacious doing seethe within the interior of that taxi, except when the moon is mooned. |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/28/2012 |
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| As you know from some of my own writings, I'm a prodigious follower and sometime-creator of surreal glimpses into the mind's reality. Loved this metaphoric and personification romp with its Daliesk images. Wonderful. |
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