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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/5/2012 |
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And yet another clever style for you, my friend! Very intriguing write! Clever phrasing...leaves the reader wanting more.....
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
9/4/2012 |
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| take your seats please, and so we learn. |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
9/4/2012 |
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| Well, this first line got my attention, and I discover a breeze coming in the window of this poem. What a novel line: "burned into my looking back". "today is the fragile of sustain" presents freshness of wording that raises my eyebrows with appreciation. Same with "I am here curious" which I would like to have painted on a purple T-shirt, front and back. No, wait...on the front only, and on the back: "and there are you the sum of your delight". Those two phrases curl my already curly hair. This is a terrific piece of writing, Jerry. Makes me "scrape with unusual". Absolutely fabulous is "scrape with unusual." Thanks ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
9/4/2012 |
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I find this very moving!
Love ya!
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
9/4/2012 |
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You're a magician with words
and everyone is left to ponder about your words
well done Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/4/2012 |
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Perhaps a crescendo from
yesterdays finding a home
in your tomorrows being
the lesson learned? *Jerry*
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/4/2012 |
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Your way with words continues to astound.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
9/4/2012 |
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| Of striking resemblance to a glacier where fragments of ice unpredictably break away and become again its own origin of water. So too, most lessons learned are merely tomorrows remembered today, the vertical vortex of time cycling understanding until we get it. |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
9/4/2012 |
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| nice, yet like joy...i wait for the 'restofthestory' |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
9/4/2012 |
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A very thought provoking poem ... will there be more to add on to this interesting offer? The work almost begs for additional words; don't keep us in suspence, Jerry Very well done.
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
9/4/2012 |
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| I agree with the other reviews as this is an interesting write leaving us in suspence great writing as always Laura |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
9/4/2012 |
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And still...
I'm asking What? Great cliffhanger Jerry.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
9/4/2012 |
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Interesting write, like Budd says...
But NO-ONE is superior as a human
There are those not in human form
that are and not of this earth.
Good write for others to think about
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/4/2012 |
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a very interesting write my friend thank you for leaving this for us to ponder
budd |
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