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Societal views wrap around our unique beauty, weighing it down so that it burdens and ultimately destroys our soul
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Dark and haunting wisps of air/entangled in the willow's hair/their fickle streams cumber the sheath/forcing her to bow her head/and weep
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| Reviewed by Robert Harrison |
10/6/2012 |
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A write set out in abstract form. Cleverly done so as not to be pondered over at length to be able to interpret its meaning. A cleverly painted picture in words.
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
10/1/2012 |
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| Your introductory line alone is remarkably profound. The artwork is also profound. I understand this poem. Stunning. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/23/2012 |
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Pure artistry, so beautiful that it overpowers meaning. My feeble brain cannot see the connect with the opening statement. Perhaps there is some hidden message there that I cannot understand.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
9/21/2012 |
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Enjoyable, Your style is your style!
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/21/2012 |
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| Although I like your poem and its message, Shirley, I think it would be more effective if you were to go ahead and release the breaks into simple lines. |
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