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Floating on a Cloud
by Ronald W. Hull
Saturday, September 22, 2012
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Just realized that I “Floated on a Muse,” two weeks ago… nevermnd.

Floating on a Cloud

As I was floating on a cloud one day,
I passed over mountains on the way.
I passed over rivers. I passed over streams,
I passed over oceans full of dreams.

I passed over forests, full of trees.
I passed over valleys, verdant pleas.
I passed over you on my journeying,
with head and heart full of yearning.

Sky was no limit, for my cloud and me,
I blow with the wind, wild and free.
I blow with the wind wherever it goes.
Wherever my muse, the wind blows.

Wherever my muse took me,
soft as a breeze,
I floated a far,
I floated with ease.

On billowy white vapors of cloud,
I floated to where no one is allowed.
I floated to places that I've never been.
I floated to traces of where and when.

Floating is easy in the mind's eye,
just lean back, and give it a try.
Floating will take you to the great beyond.
To an ocean of ideas, beyond your pond.

For you may be a little fish in the sea,
searching your own little, "To be or not to be."
Why not soar like the eagle above the fray?
What's holding you back? Your ego today?

Well, back on my cloud; I'm on my way.
From this perspective I can see into the next day.
And from all my experience, it's sunny and bright,
so get on your cloud and float to the light.

Copyright 2012 © Ronald W. Hull

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Reviewed by Carol Phelan Aebby 1/28/2013
The words of this poem transported me to your cloud, floating with ease from beginning to end. I appreciated this write as I have my own cloud that I spend a lot of time on.

May your quill continue to soar to the Light!

With respect,

Carol Phelan Aebby
Reviewed by Dark Knight 1/12/2013
I liked this Poem Ron--and I often when I sleep imagine myself to be floating in the air
Reviewed by Maria Cristina Falcon (Reader) 11/11/2012
Mr. Hull, wouldn't it be a wonderful life if we could devote a part of our day riding on a "cloud"? Your poem conjures beautiful images. Thank you for sharing.
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 10/17/2012
Ron, no wonder so many comments presented about this poem. There lives a balmyness in these lines that out=does a 'spa' experience, I would venture. If we all could vacate our ego states to enter this poem wholly and frequently....the world would be a better place. Lovely poetry! ~~ Diana
Reviewed by jude forese 9/29/2012
what can i say but, uplifting ...
Reviewed by Laura Fall 9/29/2012
Truly an outstanding write laura
Reviewed by Jon Willey 9/27/2012
daydreaming, blue sky thinking, have a new tag, "floating on a cloud" a poetic escape and your muse served you well Ron - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 9/27/2012
I LOVE this poem. We need to float on our clouds more often and travel further. You have been very inspired of late.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 9/26/2012
I love the optimism in this piece.
Reviewed by Paul Judges 9/25/2012
Lovely work, Ronald
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd 9/25/2012
Well written poem, Ron. Full of optimism which is what most of us need. Rainbows
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/25/2012
"...To an ocean of ideas, beyond your pond"
ah yes, the power of floating, of imagination
without limits; such an updraught here, Ron,
a surge of energy and doing and the only way to travel

Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/25/2012
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!! HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 9/25/2012
Your thoughts so soft and billowy
for such a wonderous journey *Ron*

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by richard cederberg 9/25/2012
a fun take on (what could well be) another mode of astral projection.
Reviewed by D. Vegas 9/24/2012
Our imaginations can take us anywhere, any time...
Great write,Ron!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/24/2012
Awesome! Had to hang on to the chair to keep from floating out the window and into the soft puffy white clouds....Loved this, Ron!!! Soulfood!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/24/2012
Float On! And you've now given me the urge to take yet another wondrous hot air balloon ride whre I've always found the sensation of floating high in the sky so marvelous.
Reviewed by neerja gandhi 9/24/2012
Beautiful....feeling light already :)
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/23/2012
What a way to travel..airy and light :)
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 9/23/2012
... help, I need a tow!!!!!!!!!!!! Can I hitch a ride?! Really uplifting this dismal Dorset afternoon, Ron. Well done. xx
Reviewed by Paddy Bostock 9/23/2012
Great stuff, Ron! In a way this encapsulates the essence of so many of your other poems-to let the mind take you wherever it will. May you long go on taking us on these journeys.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 9/22/2012
I have dreams like this! It's so cool that I am disappointed when I wake up!

Love ya!

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams 9/22/2012
I love it! Be well, Kathy
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 9/22/2012
just gorgeous. I would love to float.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/22/2012
Nicely expressed.
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 9/22/2012
What a hypnotic journey Ron and you have shown
how to put the ego aside and enjoy such wonders
A very wonderful read :)

Love and Light
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/22/2012
For you may be a little fish in the sea,
searching your own little, "To be or not to be."
Why not soar like the eagle above the fray?
What's holding you back? Your ego today?

I appreciate the lovely and wise philosophical perspective that you've shared through your verses here, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Kathleen Janz-Anderson 9/22/2012
Wow Ron, this was really magnificent. It took me away. Love it.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 9/22/2012
I keep trying to float to the light, but more time than not, Ron, I wind up in a dark cave. I enjoyed this light and airy poem today.
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