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Peridot Eyes Part 1 (For Felix's Halloween Challenge
by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Thursday, September 27, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I have no idea where this is going but it won't be pretty!

Peridot Eyes
By La Belle Rouge

He watched her from across the room
dressed all in black, buxom and so tall
Through windows, light of orange moon
reflected on her locket, a red gem small
gracing slender neck on a chain of gold
an amulet shaped like a single tall tower
Hearth’s flame raged, he shivered cold
as her peridot eyes flashed fiery power
Her burgundy hair in candlelight shone
with strands of sunset russet and gold
a vision that would not leave eyes alone
What stories his dark imagination told
Small ornament of a sailing ship she wore
in feathered hat as she stood by the door

He had to know, must discover mysteries
The secrets of her piercing peridot eyes
Was she just the woman he obviously sees?
What darkness did her pale eyes disguise?
He moved to her side with stealth of a rat
“Good evening Lovely Lady, care to dance?”
She observed him with the cunning of a cat
Her clear peridot eyes were bold to entrance
“And what shall you give me for this dance?”
She asked with a pout and shadow of a grin
“Everything, My Sweet, give me but a chance”
He saw the fire flame in her eyes once again
He took her in his arms vowing to make her his
oblivious whatever you get, more you shall give

9/27/2012 La Belle Rouge

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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/10/2012
Awesome poetry, Belle; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/8/2012
the proverbial carrot on a stick Belle, begging for the next segment in the hope of a great revelation - mystery is a cape of enhancement
worn with just the right touch of arrogance - let the pen drip endlessly with intrigue - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/1/2012
finely articulated and with the right
telling detail, the picture is excellently
built..intrigue, desire, uncertainty
and imagination..they're all here;
roll on, part 2;
strong writing, Belle

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 9/30/2012
can't wait for part 2.......
Reviewed by jude forese 9/30/2012
lovely poetry, La Belle ... compelling scenario ...
Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams 9/29/2012
I am riveted already. I want part 2 now. Nice set up. Be well, Kathy
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/29/2012
You've truly made me miss our Good Old Days of Spookfest Offerings here on A.D., and you've truly made me wish for the Response that would have surely come from devilish old Brother Georg Edvard.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/29/2012
As always your storytelling is perfect and ghostly, Georg would love it.
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 9/28/2012
Captivating poetry with the tune
setting the erie pace *La Belle*

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/28/2012
Our LaBelle is back, looking forward to more!!

I miss Georg so much at this time of year!
Peace, love and light,
Reviewed by D. Vaineo 9/28/2012
Love the music and waiting...for...part...2, Belle.

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 9/28/2012
Fantastic, I can only echo the others La Belle
looking for the follow-up

Love and Light
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/28/2012
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/27/2012
Most apt and timely as "the day" approaches and a fine response to Fee's challenge. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader) 9/27/2012
I totally enjoyed it! Look forward to pt 2! Sexy, seductive and thrilling, Belle ...
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 9/27/2012
Can't wait for the follow up
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/27/2012
I'm not sure whether this leads to romance… Or? Written with a certain amount of intrigue that peaks the curiosity.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 9/27/2012
Lady La Belle ~

To entrance this mysterious peridot of eyes and cunning

movement like a cat.. Music of a harpsicord mesmerizes

the scene.. Excellent write, awaiting more you shall give..a mystery of the sailing ship necklace !!

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 9/27/2012
Love that last line, but liked the poem completely. You say you have no idea where this is going, but since this is Part 1 I know you will be back again with this woman with the peridot eyes. I await eagerly.

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