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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
10/17/2012 |
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| I never thought of my space being owned by others, It's a smart way of expressing the way the outside world invades our inner peace. the use of cloying is pretty accurate too. This is a well thought out piece. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
10/3/2012 |
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Lady Vivian ~
Lovely aura in a scene so beautiful your poetic ambiance.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
10/1/2012 |
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| Thank you for the new vocabulary word for me: cloying = something originally good becoming tainted by excess. I like how you have the 'cloying spirits' flowing, not unnoticed, but viewed from the perspective of assured calmness. For me, this could be a treasure of a decompressive mantra. Thank you! ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
9/30/2012 |
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Nice photo, lovely words and expressions; you certainly have validated yourself in this strong poem!
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
9/29/2012 |
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| Oddly, that is similar to what I tell my kids...face adversity, not only because you must to have a true life, but because there is nothing like knowing you are strong to make you feel confident and have good self esteem. Proving just what you are made of to yourself, and taking time to notice and enjoy the credit. Great work. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
9/29/2012 |
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Vivian, Who does not love Quiet...
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
9/29/2012 |
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| An interesting write my friend well done as always Laura |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/29/2012 |
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It would be nice to live without adversity. The scene looks very peaceful.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/29/2012 |
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A novel write in so few words..moved me! It is those quiet places that take us, oh so far~
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
9/29/2012 |
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May that aura shine with validation Vivian :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/29/2012 |
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| Keeping adversity at bay is wonderful, if we can accomplish it. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/29/2012 |
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Interesting thoughts...
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| Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) |
9/28/2012 |
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| another piece of work beautifully penned, vivian! anna |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/28/2012 |
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| adversity helps to keep us tuned up ;) |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/28/2012 |
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very thoughtful piece Vivian
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
9/28/2012 |
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a nice mixture of meaning carrying the elemental into the ethereal here, with "space", "spirits" and "aura" releasing the purport and "reverberate" tuning the essential ingredients to a validated key...
Nicely penned indeed, dear Vivian...
Roger |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/28/2012 |
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| Ah, getting adversity to rejoice to reverberate is a special occasion for the quiet moments for sure, Vivian. |
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