|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|My favorite lines:
"Vessel on the ocean of the verb
Enriching with foam waves of language"
Vessel, waves: ocean, foam: verb, language: of the, enriching.
At times it is not the whole poem which inspires, even as it does, it's the moments of life caught in interpretation that makes a poem a pleasure/teacher/wonder/ever.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I'm an oar floating along your poetic vessel
swimming with the muses & the poetic
waves..love your celestial sunshine Andre
Word Rivers & Poetic Fields
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|its a great pleasure to read your words again
peace be with you
|Reviewed by Larry Matthews
|A Poet creates "A Vessel On" Ah wise writer of dreams !!!|
|Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard
|Poems such as this only dreams create. Nice photo of you, my friend.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Nice to see YOU Andre Bendavi!!!!!!!!!!!! ' sea of words'...'in the nights of life'...'with foam waves of language'...'shors of dreams'------- BEAUTIFUL, TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|So good to read your work again-I trust you are well!