|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|as crafty as the persuasive gesturing and whispers of this nocturnal mistress are your lines Belle - halloween was never intended to be so overtly entertaining - 'peridot eyes' hold me in the excitement of expectation - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|A beguiling and hauting tale
that You do Oh! So Very Well..
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|she needs more , more I say!|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|ah, that sardonic little laugh..so good, so right
for this 'twilight' femme.. and those rich enigmatic
eyes..you have us at your mercy, Belle,
and i like being captive to your craft
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|For a cold clammy graveyard ditty, this one is getting very hot. And the writing ain't bad either… In fact, it is superb.
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|You like to keep us in suspense,Belle!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|This is undoubtedly getting very interesting
what a marvelous story teller you are almost
in soap opera style... yes echoing Budd more
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|i do so like where this is going, more please
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|POWERFUL WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lady La Belle ~
Twilight peridot eyes of lust..would she need more.
A vampirette would need more. Mystery avails.
Lady Mary Ann