|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|This presented itself like a waterfall. I like how short the lines are, which lend to the cascade of your experiences. Especially effective was how you listed these women in sucession and unraveled selected parts of them. An unfurling poem studded with nuggets of glinting effect: just these two words "nothing mattered" created a black hole of curiosity and intensity into which I fell reading this. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|The rendering of one's soul
writing from core of heart
*Jerry* should be a release,
also in the sharing by your
gifted talent to others
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Damn those demons! You were fortunate to find a woman with their resolve who seems to have had the mind to outwit them probably due to her posessing the caring mercy of angels as you say. You had met your match!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|“Hell is other people.” John Paul Sartre.
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Jerry, You have obviously learned from your past and forge ahead to your future, I hope.
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|it would be interestin to know what what sartre would think about this wonderfully raw write? i would love to read background character studies of marionette dottie and annette|
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|A very personal poem Jerry, with a deep and honest insight in what once was.
You’ve lived that life and it made you the man you are now.
Strong enough to look back with self-reflection.
Wise enough to reflect without judging.
Mature enough to teach us your life wisdom
Thanks Jerry for sharing with us and teaching us
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Until you went through all of it Jerry
you could not find the real you beyond
all you went through...
"now it all makes sense
what I did
why I could not seem to stop
my demons had too many philosophical excuses
Sartre, Existentialism and Me"
But you came through the fog of it all
through all the paths you walked to
discover the great you locked behind a
What a magnificent write of this man's
journey and where he stands today :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|A very personal glimpse into the soul of an amazing writer...we have all chased and been chased by our demons, my friend....
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|'Dostoevskyt' good stuff..'feeling the power!|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|a well written tribute to y a trip down memory lane for you thanks for taking us along