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Morgan B Merriweather

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Today thru Sunday
by Morgan B Merriweather

Wednesday, October 10, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A riveting reel of vapid fair weather clouds now showing

with a dusting of flicked ashes and blown smoke

drawn through the crack of the car window,

nary a notion that the diamonds in the dish bubbles

would lack the luster of his attention

or that his flippant answers would languidly billow

and then whip about beneath cloths pin despotic control,

just a quick latch turbo stroller

a new fangled dine n’ dash,

and the love errands,

picking it up

dropping it off

 

 

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Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 10/20/2012
This sings of a relationship gone dry
only the expected moves and thoughts
are conveyed to make the days appear
normal...

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 10/17/2012
I personally relate to this, Morgan. I see a life story chapter in this twelve-line poem. Gorgeous to me is: "or that his flippant answers would languidly billow/and then whip about beneath cloth(e)s pin despotic control," those two words: "despotic control" ring and ring and ring. I would sincerely love to read more of your writing in this vein and about these two characters and this relationship. "Today thru Sunday" is a great title. So, "Sunday thru Next Year?~~ Diana
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/16/2012
BEAUTY IS IN THE EYES OF THE BEHOLDER...THE HUM-DRUM OF EVERYDAY LIFE DESCRIBED SO EXCELLENTLY THROUGH A WONDERFUL POET'S EYE. THANK YOU, MORGAN, FOR SHARING THIS EXCEPTIONAL WORK. THIS IS A KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/13/2012
Mmm...so deeply human, brilliant...love this one!
Chris
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 10/11/2012
Feelings of day to day
activity, but love can
make them less mundane

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 10/11/2012
Morgan ~
Terrific synerio's to comtemplate the moods. Even dropping it off
at the dry cleaning !! Love the diamonds in the dish bubbles !!

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/11/2012
So filled with suspense that it captured me throughout without full understanding at the end.

Ron
Reviewed by Odin Roark 10/11/2012
An intriguing tapestry of age, gender, temperament and understanding with a thread or two of non-acceptance just to keep the reader and writer honest. Loved this one.
Reviewed by D. Vegas 10/11/2012
Our lives of hurrying...Great, Morgan!

Deborah
Reviewed by richard cederberg 10/11/2012
"Riveting reel"
"flicked ashes"
"dish bubbles"
"languidly billow"
"despotic control"
"a new fangled dine ní dash," haha
all these colorful phrasal accents give me the 'day in the life' feel, (I'm assuming) you strove for in this construct. Very little flows smoothly anymore out there. You poetic eyes see uniquely, MM, and your creative heart remains true. Peace and continued inspiration ... r
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 10/11/2012
"lack the notion of his attention"

"flippant answers"

Those two lines pretty much tell the story, and if the done, "love errands" does quite nicely.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/10/2012
Powerful poetry that awakens thoughts and emotions; your verses elicit reflection, Morgan. Love and best wishes,

Regis



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