Peridot Eyes Part 6
by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Saturday, October 13, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Peridot Eyes Part 6
By La Belle Rouge
Sensation of creamy skin against his chest
the soft, supple petals of an ivory Easter lily
Of all the women he had bedded she was best
He felt like a schoolboy, excited, almost silly
What had he done to deserve such rich gain?
Perhaps he had been at the right time, place
She put him through ecstasy, agony and pain
Voracious the needs of vixen with angel face
She fulfilled all the fantasies of his dreams
dark things he’d dared not ever speak aloud
He lay in the night devising lover’s schemes
how to keep her close, of his prowess proud
He drifted to sleep around stroke of midnight
Many dark hours remained before dawn’s light
He woke in thick darkness to dog howls in the field
reaching for her he realized she had disappeared
To have her love he would lie, die, kill or steal
The night of a lifetime into his heart was seared
Where had she gone, bewitching night creature?
He must seduce her back into the red brocade bed
He would find her soon and when he reached her
he’d entangle himself in red tresses of her head
A familiar noise from the bath chamber he heard
Someone enjoying a leisurely bath in the copper tub
He would surprise her without even speaking a word
Perhaps she would be receptive to an erotic back rub
He opened the door and by dim, flickered candlelight
His offended eyes beheld a most horrifying sight!
10/10/2012 La Belle Rouge
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|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Belle, you tease us with this mystery and the want of the next episode - she is the devil's delight, this temptress - you make spooky, eerie a treat to read -- I wish you peace and love my dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Smiling you know how to keep
us wanting more
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|You have matched the music nicely with this, it seemed go right along as a read, adding to the spook factor and keeping this reader completely engaged!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|love these continous poems, they keep me on the razors edge of excitment, thank you Belle for this is a real treat
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Oh! My Goodness..eerie as the
music *La Belle* wanting more
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|And now, like a good novelist you are, you leave us hanging! That's very naughty of you and there's nothing better than a naughty red haired girl that needs a spanking.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Captivating tale, Belle... ...and most apt and timely considering the approach of Halloween. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|alright..all right..more, i am ready for more
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|You are killing me, Belle!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Captivating, dusky and sensuous with a spooky-licious twist, La Belle...fabulous write!
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lady La Belle,
Enchanting and mysterious for the fright alas !
Captivating write with music horroring to shivers !
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|EEk' great stuff|