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Affirmations by a Rainy Day
by Vivian L Dawson
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~Affirmations by a Rainy Day~

A path filled with too much rain
falling on deft ears..turn around
girl to find a romantic route of

Synergism unfolding within
thyne own self letting a true
love towel dry you comforting
your source of concerns

Instead of hiding emotions in this
deceiving liquid sunshine a vow
not to walk alone again in the rain

(c) Affirmations by a Rainy Day
Vivian L Dawson


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Reviewed by Edward Phillips
rainy days were meant for lovers
to run to walk to gaze
to get dripping wet
and then to kiss.
what compares to this?
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
You have got me humming that song from Carousel that goes something like "When you walk thru the storm, hold your head up high," same sentiment, different treatment. Like the idea of a true love with a towel.
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
How beautiful to describe
between two and lovely affirmations
using rain as the gentleness of love

Love and Light
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
makes me sing ole lonssome me--------lol hg
Reviewed by D. Vegas
I guess the rain can draw all kinds of thoughts...Vivian.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
up north I used to love walikng in the rain
but where I am located not, its not a good idea
enjoyed reading your thoughts
Love & peace be with you

Reviewed by Janna Hill
"A path filled with too much rain falling on deft ears..turn around
girl.." Those first words stick in my head like thick honey.
Beautiful Miss Vivian.
:) Janna
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Powerful affirmations indeed.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
a wonderful write, often we can really feel our emotions walking in the rain. keep going, anna
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Such beautifully crafted wise truth in this one!
Blessings, xo
Reviewed by Laura Fall
An excellent write my friend Laura
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Lady Vivian,
Emotions on a rainy day sunshine.
Not to walk alone again in the rain.
That special someone to hold the umbrella
and walk with you. Sweet write.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Every so often Ron comes up with something not smartassed, and this is one of those times.

You grabbed me when you wrote, "towel dry you comforting / your source of concerns"

I absolutely love your little vignettes of daily life and love and yes, Ron, tears.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Only to hide tears…

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