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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
12/3/2012 |
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Wither away or bloom it may
..better to have loved..than
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
12/3/2012 |
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| Amen to that... all I need to say.. |
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
12/2/2012 |
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| Just very good thoughts here, Jerry. Too many let jealousy get in the way. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/2/2012 |
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A love sonnet of life's most intimate feeling, love! Oh Jerry, love is the best feeling in the world, but we must all love ourself first, then being loved and loving comes naturally without conditions or restraints. When I love it's forever no matter what, just ask all my ex lovers! (not really too many, lol)
Anyway, this is a fabulously written poem with an important message.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
12/2/2012 |
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I really enjoyed this sonnet, and especially appreciated the closing rhymed couplet. Strong close to a quite a good poem.
Roger |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
12/2/2012 |
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| I read that we try to make someone into something we think they should be so that we love them. Which I would agree is not going to work. great poem cheers! |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
12/2/2012 |
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| Truly a meaningful write written so heartfel and beautifully deep Laura |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
12/2/2012 |
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Love is a most fulfilling emotion
Love can bloom into the most beautiful flower
One that can out adorn any arrangement made
by a florist...
Love like a flower blooms and grows, however...
it does not die, even after the body is gone...
Love will last an eternity if it is tended to
nourished and cared for and well protected from
harming elements...
Beautiful sonnet Jerry
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
12/2/2012 |
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That was quite inspiring.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
12/2/2012 |
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You have written such lovely words of wisdom. True love needs a lot of room to grow, should not be boxed in with demands and needs to be watered daily with tender nuturing. Good one, Jerry.
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
12/2/2012 |
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That is beautiful! I, after a horrendous marriage, had walls built up so high.....I believe they're still there. This is great advice to be taken to heart.
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
12/2/2012 |
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Love is the best part of everyday
be it in the eyes of a partner
or the songs of the wind
or through the joy of a child's laugh
or any other psalmic treasures of the soul...
Beyond The Moon & Stars
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
12/2/2012 |
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with this i agree completely my friend, you have written this so well
budd |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
12/2/2012 |
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There are many words in this poem that doesn't go together with LOVE (fight, deface, goals, shape it).
When love is real love, there is no room for negative things. Only good, positive and unconditional things will remain.
To give love a chance is a very good advice Jerry |
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