|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|This is a great write Jerry. Actually we can reflect all these statements upon- and ask all these questions to our own ego.
Do we not all have closed doors of our thoughts with dark and unapproachable wishes.
Is the proudness of our ego also not afraid to be laughed at and scorned.
Is it a SHE you are writing about as many think or are you writing about, and questioning your own ego.
Iíve read this already several times and it keeps intriguing me.
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|I felt I was on a labyrinthic journey reading this poem. Knowing nothing of the characters beyond this dialogue, my interest was captured quickly. It held many passages and unpredictabilities blown into full-sized surprises. A strong hand of cards wrote this piece and the final word slaps all four aces onto the table. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|you would already know her....if you knew.|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|what a wonderful write my friend loved the closing lines
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|She is who she is, Jerry, just as you "am who you am"; such questions are like the pointing finger turned back on oneself; so who are YOU?! LOL; that's just the way (after two glasses of Pinot Grigio) this delightful midsummer's dalliance strikes me this evening. But then, I've always been pretty flighty myself and relate muchly... :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Oh! so "understand" *Jerry*
many secrets inside to manifest
when I become a ghost...
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Very kool write, Jerry! Love the ending!
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|You have given your readers much to consider. Some of the happiest people I know have all sown their wild oats, have reconciled their situation in life and are content. Many have opted to just be happy, whatever the situation might be, fully living life with a smile on their face and a song in their hearts. Sounds good to me!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Ohhh - capisco!
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|OMGawsh Jerry, this is a FABulous concept
about the ego(s) becoming ghosts!!
I gotta stop lusting for my Pulitzer poem :)
Bachelors Grove Cemetery & Full Moons
(the most haunted place around Chicago)
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|This can be taken two ways,
Reflecting upon who you know
yourself to be now, and asking
who did you think you were before...
A very excellent write that keeps the
mind working and analyzing... I just love it
Your mind is a wonderful gift of expression
and so are you... Mind you now I have read this
several times trying to take it all in :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I'll take the hulking stud any day!!!
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|Whoa... some thoughts to ponder on this Monday morning... nice work!|