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Lori L Moore

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Memory's Masterpiece
by Lori L Moore

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I ache for the tenderness of your touch
at least for the touch painted by my recollection...
Isn't it strange how memories can create
the illusion of a masterpiece...

My soul longs for the simplicity of your understanding
My dreams, frozen in time, stand still with clouded visions
of the one I thought you were...

Life is a dream, a lyricists masterpiece
a painting upon godís lifeless clay
a series of shattered realities...

To be understood
To be loved
To be cared for
Are these too much to ask...

Today overflows with tomorrow's seeds
Yesterday's teacher fulfilled our need...
She has taught our lessons, she has taught them well
Heaven is here, through visions of hell...

The fire of remembrance brightly burns
love's flame is heated blue
my heart is seeking another love
my heart is seeking another you...

Another love, for a broken past
another fling that will never last...
a painted memory which was born to die
a clouded dream in a war torn sky...

This is a first draft... open for revision. Then again, all of my writing is open for revision... lol!

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Reviewed by JMS Bell
ILLUSIONS ARE DANGEROUS FELLOWS...THEY HAVE NO FLAWS, AT ALL. BUT WE ALL HAVE THEM...THEY TAKE US OVER THE ROUGH WATERS AND THROUGH THE DARK NIGHTS...WHILE WE WAIT...FOR REALITY. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Wonderful Masterpiece !!!! Thank you for such a write
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
There is no revision necessary
This is a masterpiece Lori
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
No revision needed...
Beautiful.
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
"Isn't it strange how memories can create the illusion of a masterpiece"...so true and so beautifully put! I pray 2003 turns out to be more wonderful than you could ever hope for!
Reviewed by Terry Vivian
An ache, a longing. It all sounds very good. Its got the 'feel'.
Reviewed by Terence Vivian
Lori, this is so good. I don't know why you'd think this ever should need any revision of any kind. This sounds great! Let it stay... Very nice write..
Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
Very nice writing!
Shy
Reviewed by richard poor
so good and so true....
Reviewed by Kevin Whitworth
There is no revision necessary. This is a very moving poem. I've been in th exact state you've communicated to your readers. nice.
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Very moving.
Reviewed by John Valentino
Very nice feelings from this~

John
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
12-31-02

Without Dream's You Have Nothing,i.e. as Your
Just Reward's Are Not In Of This Physical World!!

Thanks Your Comments!

TRASK
Reviewed by Lindsay Jones (Reader)
I thank you, Lori, for writing something I could so perfectly relate to. It does seem strange how memories erase the negative when caught up in a moment of longing...
I deal with that issue so regularly, its comforting that I'm not alone in this!
Beautiful work
-Lindsay
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Wow! An Orchestra of words swept me up and I lost a few moments of Real time there, lost in the music...even my kid talking in my ear didn't rouse my euphoria!! Whew, thank you, Lori, this is exquisite and dreamy.

Erin
:)
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
I wish my final drafts were as good as your first drafts.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Another moving, intense write...beautiful expression.
Happy New Year, Lori--I hope this year is the year your hopes are fulfilled.
Reviewed by Monty Aspromonte (Reader)
What a beautiful word dance! You take the moment, add the word, mix in the mournful, bewitching sounds of truth and reality and you have created a "Memories Masterpiece". You are truly a lady for not giving my secret away. You be cool! Thank you! I needed another avenue in which to vent. Skeeter says good morning too. Monty.
Reviewed by erica
perfect write
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Lori this is perfect. Wow. It needs no revision ... in fact to revise might detract from the wonderful poem. You are so ddep in this one. Really are Lady. yes you are.
Bill Murray
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Wonderful Write ...





Happy New Year Lori
~Sanil
Reviewed by jude forese
the canvas you paint is beautiful! really like it ;)
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Beautiful write!
Jack
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Beautiful, wonderfully done.
In Christs Love
~Michelle~
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
This is a masterpiece Lori! Sooooo now don't you go and change a thing! :O)
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Wonderfully done Lori, Beautiful
Reviewed by E T Waldron
every word registered and felt my dear, superb poetry, ...Blessings in the new
year;-)...
Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Lori I would not change a word, this is a
beautiful write.
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