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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
5/19/2011 |
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| ILLUSIONS ARE DANGEROUS FELLOWS...THEY HAVE NO FLAWS, AT ALL. BUT WE ALL HAVE THEM...THEY TAKE US OVER THE ROUGH WATERS AND THROUGH THE DARK NIGHTS...WHILE WE WAIT...FOR REALITY. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
2/21/2003 |
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| Wonderful Masterpiece !!!! Thank you for such a write |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/12/2003 |
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There is no revision necessary
This is a masterpiece Lori |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
1/5/2003 |
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No revision needed...
Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
1/2/2003 |
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| "Isn't it strange how memories can create the illusion of a masterpiece"...so true and so beautifully put! I pray 2003 turns out to be more wonderful than you could ever hope for! |
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| Reviewed by Terry Vivian |
1/2/2003 |
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| An ache, a longing. It all sounds very good. Its got the 'feel'. |
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| Reviewed by Terence Vivian |
1/2/2003 |
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| Lori, this is so good. I don't know why you'd think this ever should need any revision of any kind. This sounds great! Let it stay... Very nice write.. |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
1/1/2003 |
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Very nice writing!
Shy |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
1/1/2003 |
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| so good and so true.... |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Whitworth |
1/1/2003 |
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| There is no revision necessary. This is a very moving poem. I've been in th exact state you've communicated to your readers. nice. |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
12/31/2002 |
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| Very moving. |
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| Reviewed by John Valentino |
12/31/2002 |
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Very nice feelings from this~
John |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
12/31/2002 |
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12-31-02
Without Dream's You Have Nothing,i.e. as Your
Just Reward's Are Not In Of This Physical World!!
Thanks Your Comments!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Lindsay Jones |
12/31/2002 |
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I thank you, Lori, for writing something I could so perfectly relate to. It does seem strange how memories erase the negative when caught up in a moment of longing...
I deal with that issue so regularly, its comforting that I'm not alone in this!
Beautiful work
-Lindsay |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
12/31/2002 |
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Wow! An Orchestra of words swept me up and I lost a few moments of Real time there, lost in the music...even my kid talking in my ear didn't rouse my euphoria!! Whew, thank you, Lori, this is exquisite and dreamy.
Erin
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| Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) |
12/31/2002 |
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I wish my final drafts were as good as your first drafts.
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
12/31/2002 |
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Another moving, intense write...beautiful expression.
Happy New Year, Lori--I hope this year is the year your hopes are fulfilled. |
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| Reviewed by Monty Aspromonte |
12/31/2002 |
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| What a beautiful word dance! You take the moment, add the word, mix in the mournful, bewitching sounds of truth and reality and you have created a "Memories Masterpiece". You are truly a lady for not giving my secret away. You be cool! Thank you! I needed another avenue in which to vent. Skeeter says good morning too. Monty. |
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| Reviewed by erica |
12/31/2002 |
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| perfect write |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
12/31/2002 |
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Lori this is perfect. Wow. It needs no revision ... in fact to revise might detract from the wonderful poem. You are so ddep in this one. Really are Lady. yes you are.
Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
12/30/2002 |
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Wonderful Write ...
Happy New Year Lori
~Sanil |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/30/2002 |
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| the canvas you paint is beautiful! really like it ;) |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
12/30/2002 |
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Beautiful write!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
12/30/2002 |
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Beautiful, wonderfully done.
In Christs Love
~Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
12/30/2002 |
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This is a masterpiece Lori! Sooooo now don't you go and change a thing! :O)
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
12/30/2002 |
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| Wonderfully done Lori, Beautiful |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/30/2002 |
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every word registered and felt my dear, superb poetry, ...Blessings in the new
year;-)... |
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| Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll |
12/30/2002 |
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Lori I would not change a word, this is a
beautiful write. |
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