|Reviewed by Shirley Houston
|U made me think about the process of people learning one another in a relationship. It takes time, and there are so many mistakes we make along the way. Understanding & patience goes a long way in keeping us sane! Great write!|
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Don't worry. She will understand. It was not intended. Though misunderstandings between woman are rare compared to misunderstandings between women and men, they happen. Just being honest towards her will get things straight again.
Loved that one.
Take care okay?
|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
|I think understanding is one of the greatest gifts one can receive and give for that matter.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
OUCH! I felt, oooh. This is a really big way to say you are sorry in such a simple, subtle way. the corner thing grabbed me!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Sincerity can be felt when it is sincere, am I am sure you are sending heartwaves her way....maybe show her this poem...? We alllll goof up....part of the human experience...we are here to learn, and our mistakes are our lessons....ok off my soap box :)
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|TRASK is right.... and communication is the key...stay strong...
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This made me cry!!
Hope you will
again..you must always ask....
before you judge!!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Things work out.|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Dear Sara, Whatever You write is fine by me! Wonderfully written insightful piece!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|hopefully your appeal will be answered ... expressed superbly!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is very good.
does get in the way and
how we perceive things.
Excellent write all ya
can do is ask sorry and
go from there.
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Great write Super Girl its moving|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are honest enough to admit it and that in itself should satisfy. Excellent write!|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Ain't Nothin Wrong With Wha Ya Written_
In Ma Childhood Days, Ma Mamma, Labeled Contessa Have As Spainish Whore,i.e. No Joke...
Where We Lived It Was Pureto Ricans, Chinese, Japanese, Germans,Pollocks,Slav's,Jews,Africans,Etc.You Name It, So Who Cares__
Just Keepen On Written It Down__
Your True Friend,TRASK
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts