|Reviewed by Katharine Sparrow
|Such a delightful character, who you write about convincingly. The piece is bubbly and funny - a characteristic that I see you carry through many of your pieces! Made me smile.|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
"Lost: One Small Child Named Ronee' *FICTION!!"
Construction and execution right on point with this write.
Excellent penning Karen!
You are the greatest at these narrative type fictions.
Continued blessings of love, peace, and joy to you friend,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|So real it's sureal. Poignant write.
So enjoyed the Indian Summer of my beloved northwoods Wisconsin. With his collar, Dad is up, breathing on his own, talking, and exercising. His sores are healing, and, with time, he may do more than hang on again.
|Reviewed by Seth Mullins (Reader)
|I really appreciate the compassion that is evident in all your poetry...and, I should add, you seem to compose and rhyme so effortlessly. This one just chugs along like a freight train, and then suddenly there is the prose section which brings the sobering reality and tugs at the heart's empathy. Well done.|
|Reviewed by P. Michaels
|Is this the Ronee whose's having a hip operation? Cute free verse. Hope she makes out okay.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Cute one, Karen.
She's taken on her own personality.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful delightful fun read. Karen, you do this so well.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|ok sis, this is very good. I didn't know that she had wandered about. Is it safe for a 10˝ year old girl to be by herself??? Lovely write sis, I enjoy the Ronee stories very much, it's just that I haven't been feeling all that well lately. I'll climb back up. But right now tho, poems seem to be all I can really handle. Thnx so much for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you and Karla, and all of those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
What a delightful story! Ronee' is a remarkable child who doesn't let her "handicap" get in her way! Your imagination and creativity are stunning! Enjoyed this greatly! Thank you for sharing your talent.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was sweet and so cute! Missed her!
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Very touching my friend
love and peace
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Lovingly described and very sweetly done.
|Reviewed by Iva Lawson
|I love this. Despite the child having special needs, this work reminds us that she's still just a kid who likes doing kid things. Eye opening and mind bending.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Great immagination, Karen, to come up with this little semi-scare-the-hell-out-of-everone. LOL Really, a good exercise in the daily occurance somewhere of a child missing. Good.|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|This is delightfully imaginative, Karen! Yet realistic, as well. Your writing does your tornado name justice. You whirl your reader into the heart of your idea.
Great idea well executed!
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|superb write Karen..really well written..you never disappoint! Thankyou!
|Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
|Excellent poem, Karen!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You use your gift of imagination to maximum expression and sharing, Karen. Merci. Amour et paix. Ton ami de la C-B. Régis|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|super excellent poeming Karen, truly. G|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|These are endearing and captivating stories, Karen and I would love to see you continue them... if you are revisiting them now, perhaps you DO have this in mind?! It would be well-worth it! You bring Ronee alive and through her we could perhaps gain insight and understanding as to her "condition" and her perspectives on life. She has such youthful vibrancy, we could all learn and receive much from her... like her "creator", perhaps?! WTG Ronee!! The weaving in of the French is delightful and adds a sparkle, too.! TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
"Ronee" in poetic verse - superb!! Very unique!!
Best to you,
|Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
|How sad for the scap
You say she broke camp?
Is it gramp's camp
That's hiding the scamp?
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|She sounds charming and so full of life. Lovable!
|Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
|Oh My! How did this happen?|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Oh this little one has spirit!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Beautifully done and so touching. Excellent, karen
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Heeheehee! Oh yes, Karen, I remember the little stowaway in Robert's poem. Great write in response. I so enjoyed this.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Wonderfully done and heart touching, Karen.|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Very cute, and wonderfully written.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hey Karen You have to get Ed Rhea's "Unfortunate Detectimals" to search for Ronee..........hehehehehehe
I liked this very much!!
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|If I see her I'll send her back your way loved the Kewl .........write !|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well crafted... delightful...|
|Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader)
|Karen, you have a great imagination! Outstanding write! Hugs, Cathy|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Fun write. Thanks for the laugh! :-)|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wonderful imagination and a super write. So Creative.|
|Reviewed by Angelica Young
|Absolutely fabulous write! :)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow! what an imagination you have Karen! You really needed the disclaimer, because this is just like a bulletin off the TV new shows;-) Great work!|
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|What a write really good.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
hee hee what a cute response to robert's "stowaway" poem--ronee's done it again
i can just picture her, with a root beer moustache *burrrrrrrp* LOL
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|Heck, I have no idea how she ended up with me, either! **laughing**|