|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|'On his face are the lines of a lost soul,' I love this sentence, beautiful, talented. Liana Margiva.|
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|This is wonderful. So many of us could be on the streets with just a few 'twists of fate', as recent natural disasters have shown. Never say never...|
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
You left me a very kind review of "What if" back on May 2.
Very moving expression hear. My brother once tried to give a homeless
person he passed $20 just because. The man sincerely appealed to him
that it would not be Good for him to take it -- it was far too much money for anyone in his culture to have in his possession.
We haven't a CLUE how they really live. We're spoiled beyond imagining. Blessings, Vicky
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|good compassionate feeling for someone whose down; a smile or a coin can mean a lot in these circumstances. :-)|
|Reviewed by Prometheus Media
|Nice poem and photo.
I had written a long poem named 'homeless' for a homeless magazine in Chicago that was not published.
I wish you culd meet me on the Harrison Street in Chicago in 1996-1997.
Thank you somuch.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|A great photo...excellent prose!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wonderful sentiments and the photo is superb as well. Love and peace to you, Monika. Regis|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Reviewed by William Heffner
|God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Officer William Heffner
|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|Good poem, Monika-
Just a couple of things for you-loneliness-Check your tense to keep it in present tense all the way through. Just for you- Jerry-I have a new poem-Tasting The Night- Try it when you have time.
|Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja
|A nice poem. A beautiful picture.
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|very well done|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Breathtaking picture and wonderful write!!!!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Monika, the beautiful sunset is staggering! And this touching poem of a kind deep made me shed tears. I seemed to share with you and the man the different feeling involved. So many of us brush off homelessnes with the thought that they don't have to be there. Well some don't put a lot do. And many will stay homeless unless our society changes its blase attitude toward the less fortunate. You are a very good writer Lady. Bill Murray|