Raw (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 10:48:14 AM
Your poem is alive with unbridled adventure and the passion of youth, bundled in tiny dreams.
Raw (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 8:54:00 AM
Nice writing...I love the line; "Language is the love of raw skin"
Raw (Poetry) - 1/19/2013 8:15:23 PM
...aptly painted emotions tear together an ardent heart aching to be filled within the lines of these sensual rhymes...
did you mean to say "stay out all night?"