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You Can Have Your Cheese & Eat It Too. (Book) - 10/5/2009 7:51:05 AM
YOU CAN HAVE YOUR CHEESE AND EAT IT TOO Written by William S. Cottringer Published in 2001 Introduction This is a self help book in which the writer has tried to show us how we can get past the confusions and chaos of our daily life and be successful in our ventures. It motivates us to dream and be keen to fulfill them. It helps us to look into the simplicities of life for finding the solutions to our life. Summary The writer has taken example of two very naughty cats and two very smart mice. The cats are always focused on creating problems, confusions and chaos in the life of the mice. But the mice are very smart they always find solutions to the problems that are created for them till the time comes that everything gets so messed up that nobody, neither the cats nor the mice, can find out what’s happening around them. The writer has tried to show us how we focus on wrong things in our life and create confusion and chaos for ourselves. This is why we think we can’t have our cheese and eat it too. According to him we are always trying to change things to our liking before even knowing what we really want, so, first we should change ourselves according to the prevailing conditions and analyze where we are and where we want to be. By applying simplicity to our life we can easily bridge this gap. Critical analysis It is a perfect self help book in which the writer has illustrated very well how simplicity can solve many big problems of our life which, sometimes, are created by ourselves

The Bow-Wow Secrets (Book) - 2/18/2006 6:14:53 AM
I love the idea of the simple wisdom of the dog. Bow wow.

The Bow-Wow Secrets (Book) - 2/15/2006 1:09:21 AM
Congratz on the book!! Souns like a winner to me....love the cover....it tells a thousand tales!! love Tinka

You Can Have Your Cheese & Eat It Too. (Book) - 2/3/2003 4:27:26 PM
How sweet it is! Even a small amount of understanding and compassion can truly change a hard cored individual into a warm hearted soul. Love is the key to happiness, happiness is the road to success, success leads to rewards, rewards are smiles, and smiles are crown jewels. We all need to pass along crown jewels! Loved the excerpt. Joyce Rapier authorsden.com/joycelrapier

You Can Have Your Cheese & Eat It Too. (Book) - 12/21/2002 6:00:39 PM
I ordered the book and thought is was wonderful. Very please with all of the advice.

You Can Have Your Cheese & Eat It Too. (Book) - 9/22/2002 6:22:53 PM
I am the author's oldest daughter. I have to tell you that my dad has a mind I long for. This book is so creative and it can make life much more simple for us all.

You Can Have Your Cheese & Eat It Too. (Book) - 8/30/2002 6:16:37 AM
I'm not saying this is a great book, just because the author is my granddad, but..that helps. Seriously, you should read this clear map of life.

You Can Have Your Cheese & Eat It Too. (Book) - 8/30/2002 4:59:22 AM
Great little book-- must reading for people who are wanting more out of life and who want to close the gap between where they are and where they really want to be. Excellent insights!

Finding a Title to Your Book (Short Story) - 2/24/2014 11:38:10 AM
Hey I am now in my 7th decade and am still fiddling with my book title. I know my mission though--you can only ge genuinely successful and authentically happy by thinking and acting the right way to get there! Bill C.

Finding a Title to Your Book (Short Story) - 2/24/2014 11:29:57 AM
William: While in the Marine Corps in 1965; I had a similar experience as you in Vietnam. Actually off the coast of DaNang. I was on a search and destroy mission in the Gulf of Tonkin and we were being chased by a Russian submarine--that was trying to torpedo us. We were all ordered to General Quarters as the ship zig-zagged out of harms way. I thought then--as I lay up against the bulkhead--;a torpedo could come crashing through any moment, and we will all be blown to pieces and scattered all over the Pacific ocean. Like the others; I waited, second by second. Waiting for death.

The Two Things God Wants From You (Short Story) - 2/21/2014 7:27:36 AM
Amazing "coincidences" John. Great comment. Thanks. Bill C.

The Two Things God Wants From You (Short Story) - 2/20/2014 7:15:12 PM
In reading this short story, I would occasionaly stop, squint my eyes, and turn my head sideways. It was as if you were telling the story of MY lifes experiences. With all due respect; I had experienced many of the same experiences as you, and traveled the same road of discovery. As a Marine in Vietnam, I had a similar experience as you. Circumstances saved my life--more than once. Like you, I had a few "angel" experiences too! Like the one when I had left the Hollywood business and headed home to "get my mind right." I was heading across the Mojave desert and climbing the long upgrade of the continental divide. The engine in my small, loaded down sports car made a loud banging sound and the engine just stopped! I prayed to God to push my car up over the mountain so that I could have a chance to coast to a gas station and fix the car. In an instant, the car just quietly rolled up the mountain to the crest and over top. I coasted to a gas station in Kingman Ariz. There, they took the engine apart and said: "your engine has exploded inside and some of the valves are missing metal!" He showed me one. I knew then that an angel had pushed me up and over, so that I could continue my journey home. True story! Only someone like you would believe me because of your own encounters. There were other more horrifying incidents in my life where God's presence was evident. There was a movie [Unbreakable] starring Bruce Willis, and in that movie, Willis was stalked by a man who wanted to find out why he doesn't die in so many accidents he is involved in. Watching that movie, I couldn't help but wonder if they had heard me tell my story to some directors in Hollywood, who took notes and wrote the script! John

Doing What Matters Most:: Simplifying Your Overload (Short Story) - 5/23/2008 8:14:18 AM
well said

Doing What Matters Most:: Simplifying Your Overload (Short Story) - 3/4/2007 4:53:24 AM
Alot to master here....but thanks for sharing!! Love tinka

Hannah's Christmas Wish (Short Story) - 9/11/2006 4:27:21 PM
It always happens around September. I get this feeling inside of me that Christmas is on its way, and I can hardly wait! Hannah's Christmas Wish is without a doubt a good Christmas tale. Well written, well thought out. I admire that it was written with a point: Designed especially for Hannah E. Gilbert. That just welcomes the Christmas spirit! I'm all excited! Now I'm going to go home and watch Frosty the Snowman and eat sugar cookies! Keep up the good work, Will. You're a good writer. C.S.H.

Finding a Title to Your Book (Short Story) - 8/24/2006 12:25:23 AM
Awesome read, I like your style! Your a great guy. :) R.

Hannah's Christmas Wish (Short Story) - 12/27/2005 8:57:34 AM
delightful write, very well done! (((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Hannah's Christmas Wish (Short Story) - 12/26/2005 5:32:46 PM
Hi I am Hannah Banana and I think all children will enjoy this story. My Grandpa Bill has written this just for me. I am so excited about having my own Christmas story. Hannah E.Gilbert

Hannah's Christmas Wish (Short Story) - 12/26/2005 2:29:16 PM
This is a precious Christmas story for young children to help teach them high self esteem. I highly recommend it as a great read to your children. Reading to children teaches interest in reading for the chilren and is quality time spent together.

The Dream (Short Story) - 6/12/2004 10:51:44 AM
An excellent and enjoyable short-story, William - enjoyed! Robert.

My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 1/31/2003 1:43:14 PM
Bill- have a great ability to share your experiences and let others learn from them. You opened many eyes to our own "brick walls" and gave us great advice on how to tear them down.

My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 1/23/2003 9:52:22 PM
I found this story of your life to be very enlightening. It opened my mind to a lot of truth and not just in a shadue of my oun prospect but in a spiritual one as well. Life is a journey for us all and full of "brick walls" as you say but I believe that for one to overcome these obsticals we must pursue our lives with great persoverence. God has a plan for us all and nothing happens for no reson at all. Our "brick walls" that we face help mold us to do His will and shape our lives, for "we are the clay and He is the potter" Isaiah 64:8.

My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 1/21/2003 6:52:20 AM
The complete truthfulness of this story is verry helpful in times of need. It also makes me more appreciateive of what I have in my life. This story is a blessing!

My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 1/21/2003 5:43:01 AM
The most heartfelt and honest stories are those of ones life. This one is making me reflect on my life to see how I can avoid "brick walls" so I don't live my biggest worry. Good stories do that and so do the people who write them. As we look on in our lives we can't assume that we have only good times to come. We have to reflect on our past and then look forward and make sure we don't let our pride stand in our way. Great story. I will definitely read some more.

My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 1/9/2003 6:00:17 PM
In reviewing "My Brick Wall", which was not only moving but hit home with me personally. I set back and saw myself go down the same road as I was reading and what a breath-taking story!!

My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 9/26/2002 9:40:06 AM
Timely and honest in these difficult times

My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 9/13/2002 9:27:14 AM


My Brick Wall (Short Story) - 9/1/2002 12:34:10 PM
The brutal honesty and raw emotion are gut-wrenching, gripping, and powerfully moving. ALL of us face these "brick walls" - so to read a story of such personal triumph, lesson learned, and glorious culmination, is inspirational and uplifting. This story needs to be told and re-told, as most of us have been there at one point or another in our lives.

Elements of Critical Thinking (Article) - 12/6/2014 9:08:42 AM
Bill, It seems you're generalizing too much here, purposefully ignoring religion and ideology. For instance born-again Christians accept the Bible as being literal. With this sort of attitude, you can't do any critical thinking. Education and creativity actually become the enemy. Born-agains deny that the New Testament wasn't compiled until the fourth century when Constantine became a Christian. Bishop Iraneus and others then decided what would go into their creed, completely ignoring the Gnostic gospels (which were more humanistic). The same thing happens with politics. It's fashionable these days for conservative politicians to refuse to negotiate; hence we wound up with less than 200 laws passed in the House, many of those being symbolic. You're not going to get any critical thinking when those you're addressing are against thinking period.

20 Writing Tips for Better Results (Article) - 6/14/2014 4:45:31 PM
6-14-2014 Writers Are Born Innate-Who Needs Reviews That What You Are Driven To Or Classifies Themselves As Author!? TRASK...

Your Prosperity Zone: A Treasure Chest of Health, Wealth & Love (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:41:51 AM
enjoyed the read

Yes…The More Plan B's and C’s the Better (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:39:52 AM
well done

Why Somebody Else Can’t Tell You How To Be Successful And Happy. (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:39:08 AM
well said

Why Some Religions Are Dying While Others Are Thriving (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:38:44 AM
thought provoking read

Why Relationships Fail (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:38:00 AM
well said

Why Do people Lie? (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:37:26 AM
thought provoking

Why Do Bullies Bully? (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:36:53 AM
insightful article

20 Writing Tips for Better Results (Article) - 6/14/2014 11:34:16 AM
well said

20 Writing Tips for Better Results (Article) - 6/14/2014 7:47:59 AM
Tip number 21: The AD editor does not like complex (hidden) formatting in Microsoft Word. I usually save my document in something with less format, like text (.txt) or rich text (.rtf) before copying, and then make sure that I use a "special" paste in my browser. I use, "Paste and Match Style" in Safari to get my story to look like it was originally formatted. You are well researched and written. Your tips seem to apply to nonfiction writing rather than fiction or creative writing of any type, like poetry. I have a feeling that you are highly driven to financial success. Most authors like myself, while I don't mind making money, are driven more by philosophical thought and creativity than mere "success," whatever that is. Ron

20 Writing Tips for Better Results (Article) - 6/14/2014 7:16:18 AM
I am wondering why this article is running altogether and not like I cut and pasted it into the upload menu...and why all the pop up advertisements???

Elements of Critical Thinking (Article) - 4/1/2014 12:32:48 PM
This is exceptional article in quality, tone, and need. Long ago I incorporated critical thinking into every aspect of my life, into teaching, and into my book. I even have a set of Powerpoint slides on the subject. I believe it should be taught at every grade level in our educational institutions.

Elements of Critical Thinking (Article) - 3/29/2014 8:45:11 AM
Your article on "critical thinking" has me thinking! With all due respect to you and all other writers on the subject of "mind-%$#.!*&"; I personally think that too much overanalizing things is just as detrimental as it is enlightening. This glut of information on so many subjects today has many people running around "second-quessing" everything an everybody. A case-in-point is the fiasco on CNN about the missing airline in the Indian ocean. A whole panel of experts applying their "critical-thinking" to solve the mystery. The words of King Solomon are so true: "For in the abundance of wisdom there is an abuncance of vexation, so that the increase of knowledge increases pain." Ecclesiastes 1:18

Elements of Critical Thinking (Article) - 3/28/2014 11:31:39 AM


Elements of Critical Thinking (Article) - 3/28/2014 10:54:44 AM
Your article on critical thinking is very well written and concise, helping others to understand the process better. I especially like the way you condense several libraries of information into short descriptions that people can lay a handle on. Unfortunately, perhaps because I just ate lunch, I found my mind drifting before I finished reading. Whatever we can do to improve critical thinking is very important because as time goes on and technology progresses, problems become more complex and ambiguous and the need for critical thinking becomes more important because these problems cannot be easily dealt with or solved with simplistic thinking. And they can't be ignored. Ron PS. By some quirk of paradox, my first comment, when submitted, was interrupted by an AD announcement of a "temporary repair." My comment went into a black hole, and, with my short term memory being what it is, disappeared forever. Trust me, it was better than the above.

ACCEPT ADVERSITY, BOUNCE BACK & GET GOING (Article) - 2/24/2014 2:53:27 PM
Great comments Mike and Ron. Great attitudes!! I think the magnitude of the pain we feel from our adversities has a lot to do with our opinions about them, ourselves and life in general. That is a choice that helps shape how we feel and respond to the adversity. Bill C.

ACCEPT ADVERSITY, BOUNCE BACK & GET GOING (Article) - 2/24/2014 2:03:36 PM
Thank you for this article. It is just what I needed to read. Well written and organized.

Why Some Religions Are Dying While Others Are Thriving (Article) - 2/24/2014 11:34:22 AM
Points well made John. I think we are quickly entering into an era where pre-packaged solutions came with every problem no longer exist and where creative, critical thinking are the only solutions to resolve the kinds of con flicts and problems that are now upon us from the Information Age. Thnaks for your comments. Bill C.

Why Some Religions Are Dying While Others Are Thriving (Article) - 2/24/2014 11:06:25 AM
William: You are an intelligent man. I see that you are able to get to the grass roots of many like issues we all face. Like in this piece on Religions. Yes, the "selling" of Religion is at an all time high right now--at least in America. This young man [Joel Olsteen] is the quintecential example of your assesment. The huge building! The huge crowd! The huge MONEY he and his wife are piling up! The old addage: "if you package shit in a beautiful package, people will want it and buy it...." His whole package is beautifully presented. Tony Robbins also did a good job of wrapping and selling! He is now a BILLIONAIR! By the way; I personally had something to do with Tony Robbins success. I told him how to wrap his shit and sell it, way back when I had to pay for his cigaretts and coffee. If you browse over the many so-called evangelists and preachers on the radio and television stations today, you should be amused at the way some of them actually make a fool of themselves, in the way they speak, the way they prance around on stage, the way they play-act out stories, and the way they express shallow emotions in their presentations. I think you get the point! John

ACCEPT ADVERSITY, BOUNCE BACK & GET GOING (Article) - 2/9/2014 9:02:51 AM
My paralysis is not temporary, it's permanent. But I never stopped going. Ron

Five Pillars Of Happiness (Article) - 8/6/2013 10:40:54 AM
I think there is one common "purpose" to living--enjoying life and solving problems in the way and helping others do the same. How we carry out this generic purpose is up to our chosing. But I don't think we can sustain our happiness by ignoring our common purpose with any "customised" choice of how to do this. Thanks for your comments! Bill C.

Five Pillars Of Happiness (Article) - 8/3/2013 3:16:22 AM
Well done as I agree that number one is Purpose. The book, "Purpose Driven Life" did not become a best seller by accident. We all need a purpose in this life and we need to feel we are doing something that is meaningful so we can make a positive difference. The other pillars mentioned follow but not in any particular order. I would place balance in the second position because if we run over our family and friends to meet our purpose we will indeed be unhappy in the end. Amen!

Five Pillars Of Happiness (Article) - 8/2/2013 6:42:58 PM
Totally Off The Wall... TRASK...

Little Laws 4 Big Success (Article) - 7/5/2013 9:52:05 AM
Another interesting book is Deepak Chopra's "Super Brain." The major paradigm transition that is going on with brain research is that human evolution is aimed at learning how to use our minds to re-program our brains limitations. having ADHD, it is very difficult to silence my mind and I am not quite sure I want to do that, except when trying to sleep! Thanks for the info and review...Bill Cottringer

Awful Addictions (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 9:42:55 PM
These words are true meaning of real reality. I like this very much. My best Jane

Going Up of Down? (Poetry) - 6/17/2014 5:01:38 PM
GREAT words of wisdom William. Where have you been??? We need more convicted Christians life you on the Den. Come visit my website soon. Peace, Love, and Multiple Blessings in Christ, John Michael

Going Up of Down? (Poetry) - 6/15/2014 11:13:01 AM
well said

Going Up of Down? (Poetry) - 6/15/2014 9:36:48 AM
Sometimes it's hard to know the "going up of" for the going down. Ron

A Photographer's Eye (Poetry) - 3/3/2014 8:31:14 AM
Thank you all for the positive comments. I took some shots of some ice formaiton at our river and nearby lake in the mountains. Very interesting patterns for this year's newspaper photo contest. I insert one for this poem!

A Photographer's Eye (Poetry) - 3/2/2014 3:51:28 PM
this would make a very interesting 3-D pic ,,, life ... perhaps the ultimate hologram ...

A Photographer's Eye (Poetry) - 3/2/2014 9:54:13 AM
I always enjoy good photography. There's so much to photograph in this world. Ron

A Photographer's Eye (Poetry) - 3/2/2014 8:11:41 AM
these things look pretty much mundane except when they're seen through the eyes of a writer or artists...you just made some come to life...nice william

A Photographer's Eye (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 4:56:04 PM
Well Said

A Photographer's Eye (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 3:54:51 PM
Any objects and every person can be an art through the photographer's eye. That is why they are artists because they seek to see the artistic value in what they're looking at. Sandie

A Photographer's Eye (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 2:49:48 PM
ANYTHING & EVERYTHING JUST WAITING ENJOYED dWb

The Familiar Stranger (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 10:21:12 AM
Sounds like the other half… Am I right? Ron

The Familiar Stranger (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 7:30:06 AM
just be careful how you confront a stranger, you might create an enemy ... specially when he makes "me feel dead " or whacks you "with a two by four" ... i wouldn't trust that stranger at all...

The Familiar Stranger (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 6:40:26 AM
Some strangers can have good connection and be feeling like they're friends already even if they aren't; sad are the ones who were friends once and then would unfriend an old friend for a new friend whom he has not got to know well yet. Sandie

The Familiar Stranger (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 4:15:52 AM
neither should any of us doubt him budd

The Familiar Stranger (Poetry) - 2/28/2014 11:11:18 PM
Yes, well done William! Strangers can become friends just as quick as friends become strangers. Why is that?

The Familiar Stranger (Poetry) - 2/28/2014 7:02:07 PM
Very thought provoking Excellent poetry

Default Man (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 11:45:37 AM
Great wordplay… To fault or default, that is the question you have answered. Ron

Default Man (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 4:17:08 AM
Bill, I like this. I hope you had a great Christmas and wish for you a Happy New Year.

Problems, Conflcts & Words (Poetry) - 3/18/2013 8:53:33 AM
This is very true William; words can kill or enliven, and you have said it in a most interesting, and creative manner. Continued success- Barbara J. Henry

What Is Time? (Poetry) - 11/18/2012 9:00:18 AM
Unpardon me but I relent it boldly; For it is far ahead, if I can be sure of it, And far it is, that my hallucination be valid, And hallucination it is, as it should be, And however, unlike itself, mysterious, unknown, and untested, So it be foreseen in my tireless search.

Suicide Survivor (Poetry) - 7/26/2012 4:52:07 AM
William, I've often wondered of the pain a person has to be in to commit suicide. How desolate they must feel. If they would only think 100 yrs from now what will their problems matter. This too shall pass. Many blessings, +Linda

Suicide Survivor (Poetry) - 7/16/2012 11:17:47 AM
It may be hard, especially if one is close, but I think the best solution is to say that the person's time had come. Who are we to judge why or why not? To feel guilty for someone committing suicide, speaks of our relationship to them. Ron

Suicide Survivor (Poetry) - 7/16/2012 10:02:33 AM
Bill's poem Suicide Survivor rings true: I lost an adult daughter almost ten years to the day--the Coroner's report said "over-supply of blood pressure medicine in the blood." I felt strongly her heart - on all levels - gave out. She had put on her best pajamas and laid on the floor, no longer willing to endure the heat in the valley or the cold of alienation. I still lay down on that floor (mentally) with her at unexpected moments. Yet the guilt and grief - my own from "not doing or being enough" - have transmuted into teaching and facilitating mostly young adults in a voc ed school. I think Monica would be happy that her life was given as a leaf in the soil. Maybe not. I appreciate and enjoy Bill's crisp and wide views...

My Best Teacher (Poetry) - 3/6/2012 7:46:50 AM
my best teacher has been and still is 'experience' but 'love' comes in second. thanks for sharing. asa

My Best Teacher (Poetry) - 3/4/2012 10:27:55 AM
A lovely love poem. I really enjoyed your insight. Ron

Where Did Common sense Go? (Poetry) - 8/15/2011 5:14:09 PM
My friend you have completely said it all and said it right. I have been saying for years . . . as Nero fiddles . . .

What Is Time? (Poetry) - 8/11/2011 10:30:48 AM
The past is gone, Future is only a concept, All we really have is now. We should make the most of it. I liked this. Walt

What Is Time? (Poetry) - 1/26/2011 7:56:51 PM
Thanks all--I expanded it into an article. Bill C.

What Is Time? (Poetry) - 1/25/2011 12:22:21 PM
Wrote a poem on time a few poems back and I enjoy your take on it. George

What Is Time? (Poetry) - 1/25/2011 6:46:19 AM
A timely message. (sorry) I do think it must slow down when I'm on the treadmill. That has to be it. John

What Is Time? (Poetry) - 1/24/2011 8:37:46 PM
This was right on time... or maybe early. Any-who, I enjoyed it.

Awful Addictions (Poetry) - 12/22/2010 5:10:20 PM
addictions ruin marriages, friendships even and are not good for you. I do have patience with my friend for his addictions, but it seems to me that i am pulling away from him because of them. Wishing I could stand by in this, maybe give him a chance. Enjoyed reading this, made me think i could do differently in this.

Where Did Common sense Go? (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 5:16:17 PM
I really enjoyed this poem. I can agree with you fully.

Where Did Common sense Go? (Poetry) - 2/13/2010 9:32:02 AM
Good Question!! Love Tinka

Awful Addictions (Poetry) - 11/13/2009 9:41:07 PM
a metphor for watever life throws your way great piece of writing

Awful Addictions (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 9:12:26 AM
Jude-- You make a very interesting point. I guess the bottom line is that the "rewards" offered by the subsitute object(s) in the recovery plan have to be eqyuivalent to or greater than the rewards of the addiction, only in sociually approvied and personally productive ways! In that sense, it is the actual outcome of anything you are doing that counts--enabling (productive, healthy and desireable) or disabling (destructive, pathological and undesireable)Thanks. Bill C.

Awful Addictions (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 9:00:54 PM
do you know one can be addicted to overcoming an addiction once the addiction has been defeated ... i believe a recovering addict is in a perpetual state of withdrawal ...

Awful Addictions (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 9:25:57 AM
DONE WELL WITH DYNAMIC IMAGERY AND BLUNT, STRONG PHRASES THAT SUBSTANTIATES THE SERIOUSNESS OF THIS WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Want To Change the World? (Poetry) - 8/31/2009 10:23:48 AM
William this poem is so very interesting and profound! I shall visit you again!! Thanks for sharing!! Love And Prayers Always!!

Want To Change the World? (Poetry) - 8/9/2009 8:06:25 PM
William, We are on the same page tonight, William. I hope you read my poem How Can I Make A Difference. We have alot of the same thoughts. You are right, we can change the world one step at a time. Sometimes it may be baby steps but its marching forward. Bless you for this write! Blessings, ~Linda

ADHD Mind Oh Boy (Poetry) - 6/12/2009 11:10:25 PM
You captured the "one minute flicker" well.

ADHD Mind Oh Boy (Poetry) - 6/12/2009 10:17:27 PM
whew...what an experience

Free Will (Poetry) - 5/7/2009 7:17:44 AM
Your poem made me think William -The moral consciousness of mankind points to the freedom of will The sense of moral obligation is written in every man’s heart – it is as certain as the uniformity of nature.. We know that we are bound to do the right and to avoid the wrong. We know we are also free to avoid evil. . It is not reasonable The moral consciousness of mankind points to the freedom of will. The sense of moral obligation is written in every man’s heart – it is as certain as the uniformity of nature.. We know that we are bound to do the right and to avoid the wrong. We know we are also free to avoid evil. It is not reasonable for determanists to tell is these solid colvictions are mere illusions

Reality Repair Rx (Poetry) - 4/1/2009 3:17:49 AM
An informative poem,great work,take care Edwin

Reality Repair Rx (Poetry) - 3/29/2009 5:53:48 PM
A very insightful poem with a great message too. Change can come only inwardly, values nurtured by family, bred in the home before they are bred in the land. That is the real fixing. Cynthia

We Not Me (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 10:55:59 PM
Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care Edwin

What to Say? (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 10:55:00 PM
Excellent poem,great work,take care Edwin

Looking For God (Poetry) - 3/23/2009 1:19:01 AM
A most beautiful "search" framed expertly in verse, it captivates the reader. I like this poem very much I read it three times. Cynthia

What to Say? (Poetry) - 3/23/2009 1:15:07 AM
Speechlessness is normal when faced with the awesome beauty of nature. Very insightful poem! Thanks for sharing (and writing it), Cynthia

What to Say? (Poetry) - 3/22/2009 7:10:16 PM
Such a descriptive penning being caught between two worlds, the seeing and the explaining... Be always safe, Karen

We Not Me (Poetry) - 3/22/2009 9:29:59 AM
Well expressed William!! Love Tinka

What is Self? (Poetry) - 3/21/2009 5:28:18 PM
Wonderful questioning.... So true, our so called individual self merges into the Oneness that we truly are! The root meaning of individual is indivisible... no separate unit entity... but the one Self, each other... united, family, All.. Thank you for sharing the beauty of this William! Love and Gratitude, Suzie :-D

We Not Me (Poetry) - 3/21/2009 5:21:43 PM
More about we!!! Love it William! Thank you for the wonderful unfolding of this poem! Love, Suzie :-D

Smiling In Bad Times (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 2:12:38 AM
Everything you say is the truth and people should smile even when things go bad.When you smile,the whole world smiles with you.Thank you for sharing this poem and let people know that there are still things in this world that people should appreciate like our lives,our selves,etc.take care Edwin

Unfair? (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 2:06:22 AM
Excellent poem,very well written,take care Edwin

Unfair? (Poetry) - 3/13/2009 6:27:37 AM
Hi William, Effective write! The point expressed is strong and the impact strike like a bullet! Great style and form! Cynthia

Unfair? (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:34:25 PM
Not all is fair, the reason I guess justice is sometimes blind. You have hit the mark with this one though... Be always safe, Karen

Smiling In Bad Times (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 3:16:49 PM
Jill good for you...I can't imagine the degree of resiliance you have after thriving past that kind of hardship! Thanks for sharing. Bill C.

Smiling In Bad Times (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 4:51:42 AM
Keeping our smile in difficult times is so, so important. I have neighbors who believed I was halfway crazy for smiling and making jokes when Hurricane Ike left us a 5 foot 8 inch debris pile in our living room from damage sustained through an 18 by 24 foot hole in the roof. If we lose our ability to smile, however, we lose sight of how things were and can again be. Thanks for sharing this poem, William. I enjoyed it. Jill

Smiling In Bad Times (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 3:51:54 AM
Keep smiling dear man..enjoyed...stay safe and well...Hugss

Smiling In Bad Times (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 1:23:42 AM
WOW! This is true William, what an awesome write. Smile is the best natural medicine, A best gift that God has given to mankind. Keep writing (((HUG-I-O-S)))

Smiling In Bad Times (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 10:13:12 PM
How true Bill, this surely comes straight from your heart!! Funny but I could just not write poems that don't rhyme, I thought they gotta rhyme or they aren't poems...that was a childish perspective though!!! Keep up the great work.I for one enjoy what you write.Have my exams coming up post which I intend to get seriously involved in writing. P.S. - This isn't the only work of yours I've read, would surely tell you later why I never commented earlier...an interesting tale itself. But just so you know Bill...to me you are an "Inspiration". If you feel like checking my profile don't do so coz I have nothing written there..LOL..again plan to get onto this site seriously once I'm done with my exams Keep Smiling!!! =)

I Can't See Reality (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 2:17:23 PM
For we walk by faith and not by sight. This poem reminds me that God says, 'no eyes have seen, no ears have heard, neither has it entered into the hearts of man the things that He has prepared for us.' And so, the unseen is actually unimaginable from our human perspectives...Isn't that cool? Blessings...Frances

An Uncommon Pursuit of Happiness (Poetry) - 12/25/2008 5:34:46 PM
Thanks all...Watch for my first book of poetry after 7 self-deveoplment books--Life's Lessons Summarized, Publish America. Bill C.

An Uncommon Pursuit of Happiness (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 9:03:59 AM
Very profound, and tells about all aspects of life. Great philosophical poem. Mary

An Uncommon Pursuit of Happiness (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 8:47:17 AM
What a wonderful list you have made. Enjoyed reading it.

An Uncommon Pursuit of Happiness (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 8:14:56 AM
Perfect, the way you turned this one around: "By giving them to others, As an uncommon way, Of just being thankful" What more than this can we ever need? Perfect :-) Ted

Love Really is Simple (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 8:02:46 AM
Very true indeed with your words and the message that it sends.take care and good poem Edwin

What is Self? (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 8:01:00 AM
Very well written poem,take care Edwin

I Wanna Help (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 8:00:07 AM
An excellent poem.take care Edwin

An Uncommon Pursuit of Happiness (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 7:58:58 AM
William,this is a fantastic poem fill with wisedom that all of us should live by.Everyone wants to be happy in any way possible without being mean-spirited.Every single day of my life,I'm always happy and thankful of the gifts that I have.I really enjoy this poem,take care Edwin

I Wanna Help (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 6:09:09 AM
I'll accept your help. Just reading these few words and knowing you care to help others is comforting. Stay the kind of person you are and everyone will love you for it.

I Wanna Help (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 3:22:49 AM
nicely done

I Wanna Help (Poetry) - 11/20/2008 8:10:20 PM
Very good advice! Mary

Time is Strange (Poetry) - 11/18/2008 9:51:34 PM
It sure can be fleeting at times. Grab each moment and savor it always.... Be always safe, Karen

Broken Brains (Poetry) - 11/18/2008 6:24:02 PM
This sounds like someone I dated to a tee, though we all are like this at times, good work.

Broken Brains (Poetry) - 11/17/2008 8:31:18 AM
the real self is knowledge, character, ability and verve all the rest is just broken baggage on the brains ... well done ...

Broken Brains (Poetry) - 11/17/2008 1:08:05 AM
What excellent work.

Broken Brains (Poetry) - 11/16/2008 7:25:28 PM
Outstanding Bill. Outstanding!

A VOICE FROM THE GRAVE (Poetry) - 10/11/2008 8:07:09 AM
Thanks folks and please check out my new article on Bullying...which is part of a project I am working on as a PBS production. Bill C.

A VOICE FROM THE GRAVE (Poetry) - 10/5/2008 7:29:59 PM
Very touching and just rips at the heart to find the right road to travel to help others before they fall, wise words... Be always safe, Karen

A VOICE FROM THE GRAVE (Poetry) - 10/5/2008 3:28:23 PM
powerful read

Love Really is Simple (Poetry) - 8/10/2008 6:01:31 PM
A wise man once said that heaven is within you. Speaking for myself, I also yearn for knowledge. Mixed with love, it becomes wisdom. S

Love Really is Simple (Poetry) - 8/10/2008 4:11:38 PM
Ah if it were only that easy.

Blur (Poetry) - 8/7/2008 2:45:36 AM
Good Morning William I enjoyed you emotional poem, I was unable to visit your link "The Prosperity Zone" Embraced ~ Embrassé Vickie

I Can't See Reality (Poetry) - 6/19/2008 10:55:27 AM
seeing is believing

Blur (Poetry) - 5/26/2008 7:42:37 AM
Need to slow down , we all do at times. Our minds and bodies just want to dart hither and thither and not give us much rest.

Blur (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 2:12:02 PM
William, life is full of living in the fastlane and sometimes we have to stop & take control of the hour or we'll burst.

Blur (Poetry) - 5/13/2008 11:58:52 PM
This is excellent and describes well the fast track that so many tend to be on.

Blur (Poetry) - 5/13/2008 8:19:19 PM
Sounds like you need a little quality time at a very slow pace, well versed.... Be always safe, Karen

Blur (Poetry) - 5/13/2008 7:33:58 PM
That ending is very cool. We all need to get off the merry-go-round.

I Can't See Reality (Poetry) - 2/23/2008 10:11:59 PM
well versed....unable to see realties...but to tell you the truth...better not to see,the virtuality is far more interesting and meaningful to get along the real....neerja

I Can't See Reality (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 2:11:29 PM
Sometimes we see what we want our eyes and mind to see and blurr out the rest, nicely done... Be safe, Karen

Bullies (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 2:45:15 PM
Nicely written expressing the need to understand and conquer bullying.... Be safe, Karen

Bullies (Poetry) - 12/20/2007 12:05:43 PM


Bullies (Poetry) - 12/20/2007 10:30:57 AM
It's funny, Bill, when I was a kid, I was a bully, not a good one though, because after doing my bullying...I had horrible pangs of guilt...so I found a better way to deal with life. Your words are true in every sense of the word. Peace, Dan

Persepectives Are Powerful (Poetry) - 12/16/2007 4:50:17 PM
And choices we all must make.... Be safe, Karen

Persepectives Are Powerful (Poetry) - 12/16/2007 12:15:36 PM
A choice it will for ever be!! Love tinka

Persepectives Are Powerful (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 10:03:17 AM
the duality of life-choices, ones bad is anothers good and vise versa. making the choice is all that matters. well said. randy

Thank You Friend and Partner (Poetry) - 11/24/2007 9:01:49 AM
Lovely tribute to companionship!! Love Tinka

Thank You Friend and Partner (Poetry) - 11/24/2007 12:12:46 AM
Beautiful and so well expressed to the one who shares life with you..... Be safe, Karen

Thank You Friend and Partner (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 4:38:49 PM
it is always a blessing to have our mirrored image stand before us in another person. i enjoyed reading this and sense a blessed happines within your words. randy

Don't Lose Your Punctuation! (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 11:40:19 AM
Okay!! Thanks for sharing!! Love Tinka

Don't Lose Your Punctuation! (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 9:41:46 PM
Nice advice! Never allow others to cloud your judgment, well said... Be safe, Karen

Me & You (Poetry) - 11/3/2007 7:53:04 AM


Me & You (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 2:44:34 PM
You nailed this one.....love me for who I am or be damn.....well done!! Happy Halloween !! Love Tinka

Me & You (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 8:25:13 PM
I have found that it is always better to just be who you are and not to worry about everyone else. True love and honesty will always find a way.... Be safe, Karen

Me & You (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 6:57:12 PM
As well played as ever, Bill. I am surprised frequently at how many people refuse to accept others who are different than they. Especially young women and really macho athletes. Interesting combination, huh? Mark

Two Halves of Life (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 6:09:34 PM
". . . Finally looking past All this or that And clearly seeing Both this and that..." So, so true... Excellent! Love and peace~ Kimmy~

Knowing & Doing (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful, relaxing photograph! Well done and very descriptive, enjoyed... Be safe, Karen

Traveling Man (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 4:44:46 PM
But Kathy...doesn't that turn out to be a joyful surprise and justify all the bruises and broken bones??

A Few Lovisms (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 6:13:04 AM
I remember when you wrote this poem, and why. It touched my heart to read it again. Thank you. Kristine

What's A Perspective? (Poetry) - 10/16/2007 7:33:25 AM
"if you can see yourself as others see you and at the same time see them as they see themselves you have partially cleansed the doors of perception" thought provoking poem ... like how you end it ...

Traveling Man (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 2:46:16 PM
It is really sad that we have to travel so many difficult roads to reach the realization of what is truly important. Kathy

Leaning Forward (Poetry) - 7/24/2007 11:10:38 AM
Sounds like a winner combo to me!! Love Tinka

Leaning Forward (Poetry) - 7/23/2007 8:45:11 PM
Interesting perspective! Well written..... Be safe, Karen

The Success Journey (Poetry) - 7/18/2007 10:21:43 AM
Excellent..and all so very true!! Much to ponder here!! almost like."get up dammit..close the door don't slam it...go-go-go....tomorrow will be a new adventure.....good or bad!! Love tinka

The Success Journey (Poetry) - 7/17/2007 4:02:34 PM
Excellent motivational poem...You have a winning formula;-) Thanks for sharing... Eileen

Three Great Gifts (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 11:54:06 AM
Ahhhh... With him! WE can do and have EVERYThING! WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

The Roller Coaster Ride of Life (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 11:45:46 AM
Wow! What a treasure this is!!!! I thouroughly enjoyed, must read more! WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Three Great Gifts (Poetry) - 12/31/2006 4:10:41 PM
It's so amazing how easy life really is? Your words are wise and so well written...A nice flow, with a fabulous offering, through Him, with Him! Amen to your thoughts~William Love and Peace~ Kimmy~

Three Great Gifts (Poetry) - 12/31/2006 2:35:12 PM
A beautiful write my friend, for if we live for Him we shall reap all three wonderful gifts. Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Three Great Gifts (Poetry) - 12/31/2006 1:36:39 PM
A beautiful meaningful offering!! Happy New Year to you and yours!! love Tinka

Match Point (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 11:35:15 AM
Well done!! Point made perfectly!! Love tinka

Match Point (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 8:58:32 PM
clever ... you make a valid point ...

Problems or Opportunities? (Poetry) - 10/1/2006 9:38:32 AM
Reading this poem today it feels like it was written for me. After 10 years at my secure job I was laid off last week. I agree with the poem, I only allowed myself 2-3 days of poor me and in the days since I have been more determined than ever to have the life I want and will not loose that focus. Success for me is simple, my son and I to laugh, feel safe and to dream of having more. Love & Peace, your biggest fan, Rebecca Be in touch soon

Who is me? (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 4:32:23 AM
"God so loved the World that He gave the World You." Hugs Angela

Problems or Opportunities? (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 1:18:36 PM
I like this inspring poem and the endling was perfection....

Problems or Opportunities? (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 10:31:05 AM
Thanks for the tip...now sit down and listen.....oh nevermind maybe next time!! Well done..:) !! Love Tinka

Success & Failure (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 10:28:52 AM
Insightful message poem!! Love Tinka

Up and Down (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 10:27:44 AM
Cute offering.....never friendless...cause here I am..lol!! Love Tinka

Problems or Opportunities? (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 12:28:29 AM
enjoyed the poem! looking forward to reading more

Problems or Opportunities? (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 12:26:50 AM
Wisdom drips from your pen

Success (Poetry) - 7/16/2006 10:12:31 PM
When you stop talking and taking, And start doing and giving without a you, ............... I like that line, William...that's the way to the success which counts: being a worthy human. Gina

The Roller Coaster Ride of Life (Poetry) - 6/11/2006 2:33:40 PM
I enjoyed, nicely done.

The One Thing (Poetry) - 6/5/2006 6:19:28 PM


The One Thing (Poetry) - 6/3/2006 11:49:31 AM
Written with conviction and a sense of hopeless frustration. Your line: "from the cellophane sidelines" suggests a thin veneer seperating everyone from that which we do not want to be involved in but are, daily, forced to bear up under. Good job Richard

Your Own Special Place (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 3:27:54 AM
beautiful special offering!! Love Tinka

Love and Hope (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 2:40:56 PM
Faith, Hope and Love and the greatest of these is Love, St. Paul

Love and Hope (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 12:02:59 PM
Indeed it does sir; indeed it does. One can not fathom the depths of the meanings of true love nor touch with the imagination the providence of hope. You have blended a verse to be cherished. Thank you for the inspiring reminder. :)

Love and Hope (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 10:20:27 AM
Uplifting and inspiring write William!! Love Tinka

True Love Revealed (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 8:41:50 AM
Seems like we are on the same page today...lol!! Ain't love just a great thing...lol!! Love Tinka

Divine Union (Poetry) - 5/5/2006 11:03:35 PM
Stunning write William!! Love Tinka

Being in Love (Poetry) - 5/5/2006 9:53:23 PM
Ain't love beautiful!! Lovely offering!! Love Tinka Love Tinka

Slowly Moving Closer (Poetry) - 5/4/2006 2:28:01 PM
Perfect poetry in motion!! Love Tinka

The Painful Part of Love (Poetry) - 5/2/2006 3:25:24 AM
This is so very true!! Thanks for sharing your wisdom!! Love Tinka

Timing Troubles (Poetry) - 5/2/2006 3:24:57 AM
Heheheheheh...get two watches and set the time RIGHT...lol...if the one fails the other one can make up for lost time....hehehehehe!! Love Tinka

Love Is In The Air (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 4:38:22 AM
Hahahah seems like we are on the same page.....joyful write here Williuam!! Congrats...aint love just great!! Love Tinka

Love Is In The Air (Poetry) - 4/28/2006 8:44:58 PM
She cooks with cheese?... :) - Just joking. Wonderful write, and very refreshing!...like the first love type of thing. Well-done! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

True Love Found (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 7:17:26 AM
I think I know what you mean...thanks for sharing !! Love Tinka

True Love (Poetry) - 4/11/2006 8:03:58 PM
I'm a believer! This is beautiful and very meaningful to me. Thank you.

True Love (Poetry) - 4/11/2006 3:40:07 PM
Sigh! I remember love in its purest form! Brings back sweet memories. Thanks for this beautiful poem! Denise

True Love (Poetry) - 4/11/2006 12:06:51 PM
Beautiful uplifting thoughts here!! Love Tinka

In the Name of Love (Poetry) - 4/2/2006 8:52:51 AM
Bullseye!! Love Tinka

In the Name of Love (Poetry) - 4/2/2006 7:19:38 AM
Bill Divine acceptance is the Key ! Peter

In the Name of Love (Poetry) - 4/2/2006 7:07:09 AM
Bingo! You got it right, at last. Been there. Done it, and am glad. Highly perceptive and challenging composition. Thank you for this one. - Bill

A Love Poem  (Poetry) - 3/19/2006 4:53:06 AM
Beautiful!! Love Tinka

What Your Soul Wants (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 4:58:02 PM
i like the concept of hearing your soul ... fine poem!

What Your Soul Wants (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 11:01:11 AM
How the soul does want. . . and we all need to pay closer attention as you note here. Lovely concept Bro. Wm., cynth'ya lewis reed.

What Your Soul Wants (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 10:37:36 AM
I really liked this and you seem to be in touch with your own..Life is as simple or complicated as we make it sometimes..This is a poem to be read outloud and often...Thank you!

What Your Soul Wants (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 9:03:48 AM
hmmm... I can hear my mind and my heart yet the soul is having difficulty getting through... Good piece.. Vesna

What Your Soul Wants (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 9:01:23 AM
A true soul searching write!! Thanks for sharing!! Love Tinka

Soul Search (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 8:55:57 AM
Something we can all relate to!! Thanks for sharing this insightful piece!! Tinka

Who is me? (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 8:11:55 AM
We need to learn to be us and this reinforces it for me.

Her Passion  (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 5:22:55 AM
hmm..delicious! Vesna:)

Living Love (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 5:22:02 AM
brilliant! another one of yours saved..hmmm exceptional write! Vesna:)

Who is me? (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 5:20:14 AM
Who are YOU? I'd say you are a unique spirit effusing from the one..you are many personalities...and I kinda like this one LOL!....you seem witty exuberant fun intelligent etc. just the kinda YOU that the grand mozaic needs..YAY! Love this one..saved it! Vesna :)

Who is me? (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 1:34:15 AM
Darn good question and one I've been asking myself for some time now. When you have an answer let me know ;-) Wishing you well in the new year. Chanti

Who is me? (Poetry) - 1/3/2006 6:21:41 PM
The human condition spends too much time trying to be someone else. Leo Buscaglia said it best and defined it to an art form. Clever write.

Who is me? (Poetry) - 1/1/2006 9:14:01 AM
We all ask this from time to time. Good write. R

Living Love (Poetry) - 12/31/2005 4:27:01 PM
Beautiful and inspirational. Neat way to end the year. Happy New Year to you and yours.

Living Love (Poetry) - 12/31/2005 8:13:57 AM
This is very inspirational and nuturing in spirit. A wonderful poem with a substance to have hope and grow.

Why Do I Fail at Love? (Poetry) - 12/28/2005 11:59:32 AM
Love is always resent but not visible unless we truly look at the love for its existance this is well done. I enjoyed reating.

Why Do I Fail at Love? (Poetry) - 12/26/2005 6:52:56 AM
Love usually happens when you least expect to find it...suddenly a best friend turns into the light of your life. Great write, and good luck as you search for your light too. Michelle

A Few Lovisms (Poetry) - 12/12/2005 3:55:24 PM
Oh William!! This is fabulous!! I especially love this: 'True love is just on the other side of great friendship and romantic passion--it is the common deeds of loving kindness and sensitivity', and this: 'The lesson of love experiences is to gradually increase our capacity to love unconditionally.' and All of It!! 'Love is living at it’s best. Love is loving and being loved.. Love is. Love' Love it!! Well done William!! With Love & Friendship Suzie xox :-)

Her Passion  (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 10:15:57 PM
nicely penned ...

Her Passion  (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 6:10:45 PM
Taking one out of oneself -- beautiful gift. R

Her Passion  (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 4:43:29 PM
What a beautiful poem to describe someone. I thought the structure of this poem was done nicely.

Her Passion  (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 2:27:12 PM
She sounds wonderful!

A Mother of an Idea (Poetry) - 8/22/2005 3:31:46 PM
William, Great Descriptive write and full of wonder and meaning! Superb! Excellent.....write on and on! Peace'', Rich Criso Suarez

MindsEye of Success (Poetry) - 4/18/2005 12:53:49 PM
wise words

MindsEye of Success (Poetry) - 4/17/2005 9:51:31 PM
i see success as surviving with some element of dignity ... well done ...

First Things First (Poetry) - 2/12/2005 11:44:58 AM
Interesting, yes. I like your perspective. What the hell is it all about, Alfie? Oh, different subject. Good prose.

First Things First (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 4:50:56 PM
interesting perspective....... enjoyed

My Journey (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 3:48:15 PM
This is excellent, and what makes it more beautiful, I have check out many dens, and the words of God, is in all, it makes me feel strong in my faith, that we all or in our fathers house, blessing be upon your pen, you are a true warrior of God.

First Things First (Poetry) - 2/5/2005 5:57:41 PM
I ditto what Sandie said.

First Things First (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 8:47:57 PM
All faiths and religions have the same dream. Good write. Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

A Few Lovisms (Poetry) - 12/13/2004 12:18:59 AM
You are a very talented writer!

On My Knees (Poetry) - 12/13/2004 12:18:36 AM
Bravo!

True Love Lost (Poetry) - 12/13/2004 12:18:06 AM
Wise words...Good poem.

Long Distance Lov'n (Poetry) - 12/13/2004 12:17:39 AM
I can relate.... Well penned!

The Trouble With Reality (Poetry) - 12/13/2004 12:17:08 AM
Well written.

The Flow of Life (Poetry) - 12/13/2004 12:16:39 AM
Great flow!

The Flow of Life (Poetry) - 9/1/2004 12:03:43 AM
Delightful! One was always considered selfish, when they thought of themselves. That was years ago. I think back then, we missed the the point completely. Refreshing message. A true one. Love, Bonnie

The Flow of Life (Poetry) - 8/31/2004 10:15:45 PM
great flow to your line of reasoning here

The Flow of Life (Poetry) - 8/31/2004 9:43:49 PM
Actually...there is a reasonable truth to this and so.. may it flow. Amy

The Trouble With Reality (Poetry) - 8/28/2004 6:31:38 PM
the key to objective analysis to maintain focus, in order to concentrate on direction and its possibile ramifications ... well written!

The Trouble With Reality (Poetry) - 8/27/2004 1:26:11 PM
I jumped into this with both feet, slid all the way down, picked up tons of fascinating thoughts along the way. Bill, I believe the word for your interesting piece is unique... yep.. that's my final word! katy xox. (good stuff!)

The Trouble With Reality (Poetry) - 8/26/2004 5:38:33 PM
One can catch up with the time; but can never catch up with life. It is always changing. Sandie May Angel

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