Recent Reviews for Valerie Ciolek
The Carriage Wheels Go Round and Round (Short Story) - 11/6/2011 9:52:51 AM|
oooo, great story telling. Are these fiction? This engaged my attention throughout.
Weeping Willow (Poetry) - 11/6/2011 10:39:20 AM
Ah . . . But you have the memories . . . That is enough sometimes . . .
Children's Hospital 1963 (Poetry) - 11/6/2011 9:55:44 AM
compelling, didn't see that ending coming
Weeping Willow (Poetry) - 11/5/2011 5:17:27 PM
beautiful, enjoyed the You Tube also :) I had a willow friend as a youth also :)
My Pleiades (Poetry) - 11/2/2011 3:40:15 PM
shards of ether in starlight seduction
Training for War (Poetry) - 10/28/2011 1:41:41 AM
Interesting poem, I never experienced war but the descriptions contained in your poem are touching.
Ghosts don't offer real food (Poetry) - 10/27/2011 7:27:41 PM
signature line speaks volumes... sumptuous imagery rounds out this superb morsel, a savory fare indeed.
SLAV (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 1:22:54 PM
loved the photo. loved the poem.
SLAV (Poetry) - 5/11/2003 9:56:36 AM
Wow, they do look like bison don't they ?
Nice free verse. Bravo.
War-In-My-Head (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 11:52:45 AM
major goosebumps. last line rocks!
The Seneca & the Little People are One (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 11:51:00 AM
right on. and it was great to see your comments on your bio mirror my own beliefs. no, i'm not identified as Native American but can tell you more on that later.
Grandma (Nokomis) (Poetry) - 9/26/2002 11:35:10 PM
This touches home with the people and the true meaning of the respect shared by NA. The importance of those, who have gone before...S
The Seneca & the Little People are One (Poetry) - 9/26/2002 11:31:29 PM
The tears shed by so many! I feel your perception held within the reality of pain. Your writing is to the point and brilliantly written in few words...s
Heyokah Dream (Poetry) - 9/14/2002 8:35:55 AM
Valerie, this is a great poem! I loved the changes of pace almost like the beating of a hand drum and I heard the voices singing!
The Seneca & the Little People are One (Poetry) - 9/14/2002 8:32:27 AM
In the Salish tradition, the little people led us out of the center of the Bitterroot Mountains and into our lands which were taken from us...Little people are much beloved by our people! Keep up the great poems Redhawk!
War-In-My-Head (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 3:40:55 AM
When you know you were a hawk it's easy to fly. Where does on enlist in this hawk army?
Dwarf Tracks (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 3:35:29 AM
Andrew is quite right. This is a song. You have the lyrics, do you also have the music?
The images are full of movement and dance, too.
Sorcerer's Apprentice (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 3:32:56 AM
It's true! If the magician never dies then magic is forever. I always knew that. I tell the children. Close to their ear I whisper, "Magic is forever."
Training for War (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 3:29:52 AM
I taste the salty tear. I hear the voice of the mountain. Love, Anne
The Seneca & the Little People are One (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 3:15:51 AM
We need the gentle anger of one salty tear, to express the large voice of the mountain.
The Seneca & the Little People are One (Poetry) - 8/31/2002 1:53:17 PM
A true expression from a
The highest of Spiritual Levels
are writter who receive special words
Heyokah Dream (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 8:51:01 PM
It's a poetry, as it should be.
Sorcerer's Apprentice (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 8:47:55 PM
"Energy is never created
It is just transformed" it's so right and so nice.
Dwarf Tracks (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 8:44:19 PM
I hear. It's a good song.
War-In-My-Head (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 7:51:16 PM
Fly over the horizon, Hawk!
Grandma (Nokomis) (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 7:42:47 PM
It's very good, Valerie, really.
The Seneca & the Little People are One (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 7:28:55 PM
It's just what I like in poetry.
The Seneca & the Little People are One (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 6:29:42 PM
I like this! A minimalist poem that says a lot!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)