Bereavment (Poetry) - 2/6/2004 12:14:44 PM
Hey Laura, This is one of your beloved friends. I really think that it was awesome that you wrote those poems about Heather. Knowing Heather almost as well as you means that we both have a understand together. Im glad that you know how to express yourself. Good luck with the rest of your poem writing. By the way I want my boyfriend back.
Untitled 3 (Poetry) - 12/8/2002 5:04:24 AM
He was Perfect (Poetry) - 11/29/2002 9:39:27 PM
Deep write and quite well done, Laura.
Snowfall Reflections (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 3:37:50 AM
What a heartfelt and saddening write here. Maybe those words would be better said in person. Greaet write!
I sit here (Poetry) - 11/3/2002 5:48:24 AM
I sit here reading it again. Nice
I sit here (Poetry) - 11/3/2002 5:37:29 AM
Well written and filled with heart felt longing. Bill
I sit here (Poetry) - 11/2/2002 7:41:30 PM
Great write...Written so well..
I sit here (Poetry) - 11/2/2002 7:15:45 PM
Great write and can definitely relate.
The Storm (Poetry) - 10/27/2002 12:45:31 PM
Yes a very good poem. Bill
In your Eyes (Poetry) - 10/22/2002 4:16:58 AM
Great piece of wrting here. Emotion cast out before the reader. Questions asked and the answers so obvious to all but the asker. Walk away, bear the temporary pain to get over the long term suffering.
In your Eyes (Poetry) - 10/22/2002 1:45:53 AM
So touching and so sad. Bill
In your Eyes (Poetry) - 10/21/2002 9:33:05 PM
The part of you that writes speaks for your own life. Keep writing and know that you are making your way. Vicky
In your Eyes (Poetry) - 10/21/2002 7:03:44 PM
Very touching sad situation...nicely written..
In your Eyes (Poetry) - 10/21/2002 6:31:21 PM
You have eloquently captured a very powerful situation, well done
In your Eyes (Poetry) - 10/21/2002 6:29:36 PM
The One (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 7:19:46 PM
Excellent write. You so great passion in your musings. Keep it up.
Reality (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 9:21:48 AM
Interesting write. Clever use of the words. I enjoyed it.
Reality (Poetry) - 9/18/2002 7:02:49 PM
Excellent job. I know I've been there too. Keep it up.
Untitled (Poetry) - 9/4/2002 4:31:30 PM
Beautiful write. Its refreshing to know people can still feel that level of emotion for one another. Keep it up.
I Love You (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 7:43:36 PM
Excellent poem. So far its my favorite. Keep up the good work.
Sorry (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 7:42:13 PM
We've all been there. Don't be afraid to lose yourself. You will always have your friends as a guiding light.
Untitled 2 (Poetry) - 9/2/2002 7:40:06 PM
Great imagery here Laura. The pains of love are a bittersweet thing. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Mike