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Recent Reviews for Cela M Shearer

Rachel Lives (Short Story) - 9/12/2011 9:01:27 AM
Cela, Mysteriously chilling! Always, Deborah

Rachel (Short Story) - 7/9/2010 4:07:01 AM
Gripping is the only word that comes to mind when I read this. I wanted to know more and have more details...what made you so angry, and wanting retribution. This is an excellant beginning for a book Cela... fee

Rachel (Short Story) - 6/11/2010 1:03:10 AM
Yes agree with Amber...definately a good opening and will look forward to reading more of this one. fee

Rachel (Short Story) - 6/10/2010 7:27:11 PM
Quite intensely written and felt. I am awaiting more, I shall read with interest upon your next installment of Rachel... Much peace, love and light, Amber

Rachel (Short Story) - 12/15/2009 1:36:11 AM
All too often young girls fall victim to this tragic maniulation of the heart and can be overcome but it takes a good love to be patient and understanding. fee

Rachel (Short Story) - 12/12/2009 6:14:29 PM
The reality of abuse is one that is terrifying to the victim but often so hard for most to see and bring it into the open in all it's ugliness. fee

Witch (Poetry) - 10/26/2013 4:31:28 PM
She is danger personified; nicely done, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Witch (Poetry) - 10/26/2013 3:23:03 PM
Pretty scary verbiage but perfect for Halloween.

Without a Trace-2 (Poetry) - 10/19/2013 8:17:12 AM
It's difficult for us to know what will be thought of us when we are gone. But always try to leave a good impression with those we meet, as we pass by.

Loss(revised) (Poetry) - 10/12/2013 8:25:19 PM
"Knowing is a cursed thing" what a line. Very well done.

Fields of Ashes (Poetry) - 10/11/2013 10:01:11 AM
Ugh, hate the thought of winter coming on faster and faster these days.

Loss(revised) (Poetry) - 10/11/2013 8:11:43 AM
Those are the two words that come to mind: depressing and hopeless. Ron

Loss(revised) (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 4:52:19 AM
a beautiful description of quiet depression and hopelessness. i especially like your line 'knowing is a cursed thing and planning is an illusion' this line will be easily recalled by many reading this who can relate to the sadness of this lovely write.

Loss(revised) (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 2:42:07 AM
keep going you will find the light budd

Loss(revised) (Poetry) - 10/9/2013 5:30:45 PM
Been down that highway. There is a light. It is ahead. Just keep on truckin'.

Howling Winter (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 8:50:49 AM
Norma, you excel yourself! Always, Deborah

Howling Winter (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 7:45:38 AM
A creative personification of a season most dangerous. Let us hope that this is just a poem and not a person going through the tragedy of winter. The last line is very telling. Ron

Howling Winter (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 3:58:00 AM
the heart can allow for the possibilities the mind know are there budd

Howling Winter (Poetry) - 3/25/2013 3:22:35 PM
Ah, but the heart can ache for that it knows it is needful of . . .

Howling Winter (Poetry) - 3/25/2013 3:00:57 PM
Love is what makes the heart tick. Mournful and stirring poetry. George

Somnolence (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 10:35:11 PM
Excellent lines in this piece

Somnolence (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 2:14:53 PM
Where have you been, Cela? Excellent as always. Deborah

Somnolence (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 7:42:08 AM
You have captured the essence of sleep and dreams so well. I really enjoyed reading each line. Ron

Somnolence (Poetry) - 3/7/2013 5:58:34 PM
really very good i liked it budd

Somnolence (Poetry) - 3/7/2013 5:34:34 PM
Very nice Cela!! I hope to dance with some slumberous dreams tonight!! Moonlight Maiden & Nude Willow Vickie

Bedroom (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 10:26:41 PM
musty sheets... always enjoy those...

Abandoned (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 10:23:38 PM
Nice structure... story really tugs at the heart strings...

An Eternal Death (Poetry) - 10/27/2012 12:51:54 PM
Darkly compelling, Cela; somehow seems most apt and timely to me since I just posted my Halloween "poem," although I think you allude to much more than that. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Unknowing (Poetry) - 10/22/2012 4:07:53 PM
you have a lovely way of expressing your poetry Cela Ebonic Shadows & The "Unknowing" Vickie

Sunsets (Poetry) - 10/22/2012 4:05:38 PM
Beautifully expressed, so much tenderness Cela and too a stilling of a haunting embrace I really love your intro stanza as it sets an amazing mood!! Autumnal Moon Dancers & Cornucopia Seasons Vickie

Sunsets (Poetry) - 10/16/2012 6:55:50 PM
There is much more in your verses than just expressing the turn of a season. Well done, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Unknowing (Poetry) - 10/8/2012 5:32:22 PM
Where have you been, Cela, welcome back! An erie poem for sure... Deborah

Nonexistent (Poetry) - 9/24/2012 5:10:16 AM
Dark but intense writing that leaves the reader to think on it... fee

Glass (Poetry) - 5/17/2012 9:13:17 AM
great metaphor. thanks for sharing asa

Glass (Poetry) - 5/11/2012 10:39:32 AM
Reads like it could be lyrics to a song. Ron

Glass (Poetry) - 5/10/2012 9:03:32 AM
Well expressed... fee

Glass (Poetry) - 5/10/2012 5:27:41 AM
Good work, Cela.

Glass (Poetry) - 5/10/2012 3:11:36 AM
Cela, Welcome back...well done! Always, Deborah

Garden of Darkness (Poetry) - 1/21/2012 8:15:10 PM
Truly soul-reaching verses that give rise to deep emotion and meaning. Thank you for sharing, Cela. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Garden of Darkness (Poetry) - 1/21/2012 11:38:50 AM
Cela, I do love your poetry, but am waiting for that day when you find yourself putting a bit of light in your work! Always, Deborah

Extinction (Poetry) - 12/1/2011 4:34:10 PM
Cela, You write 'dark poetry' quite well! Always, Deborah

Passing (Poetry) - 11/23/2011 11:32:10 AM
Cela, Keep up the good writing! Always, Deborah

Weeping (Poetry) - 11/11/2011 7:01:35 PM
Cela, Excellent, descriptive and with great depth, Always, Deborah

Weeping (Poetry) - 11/11/2011 8:34:07 AM
Riveting words, I can so relate to this piercing feel..great work~

Falling (Poetry) - 11/5/2011 9:02:02 AM
Cela, Sad! Always, Deborah

Falling (Poetry) - 11/2/2011 3:58:20 PM
surreal reality darkening to lighten an overbearing load... it does lift, don't it?

Falling (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 2:31:51 PM
Dark and with such a sense of pain and retreat...well done all the same. fee

Buried (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 8:11:30 PM
heavy hearted ... well written ...

Buried (Poetry) - 9/25/2011 11:18:16 PM
I can feel the heavy weight of depressed longing and loss of hope, hope though that in the end the sun will still appear... fee

Buried (Poetry) - 9/25/2011 6:18:06 PM
Ah, your title i "Buried," and I'm going to post one tomorrow titled "Funeral." Gotta love it. This poem is shatteringly fragile and hauntingly hurtful. The reason I say those things is because I have walked the same rode, thought the same thoughts and the future looked dim. But the future is not dim. It is what you make of it. I know you know that. A Poeish tale here . . . last (Poetry) - 9/4/2011 7:39:17 PM
"asleep, in deepest slumber...sleep" it appears there is then the potential to awaken ... last (Poetry) - 8/29/2011 2:07:48 PM
You seem to excel at the darker writes but I like the way the ending sort of makes people believe that even in death perhaps there is comfort. fee last (Poetry) - 8/29/2011 11:44:33 AM
Cela, "Where whispers wail without a sound," Excellent writing,as I can feel every word! Always, Deborah last (Poetry) - 8/29/2011 8:40:42 AM
Very deeply moving poetry, Cela. Sometimes we need the darkness in order to appreciate the lightness. Much peace, love and light, Amber last (Poetry) - 8/29/2011 4:18:40 AM
Dark and moody, my kind of stuff for the most part, although lately I am trying to see some light. You painted life as 'tis is and death as the final dirge . . .

Descent (Poetry) - 7/8/2011 10:57:45 AM
Cela, You are Better and Better each time I read you! Keep it Going!! Always, Deborah

Descent (Poetry) - 7/7/2011 8:42:57 PM
Very well-written, and I like how the poem descends as well.

Descent (Poetry) - 7/7/2011 8:27:46 AM
Such depth of emotion felt throughout this poem. I can relate for sure. Love the way this poem flows. Much peace, love and light, Amber

Solstice (Poetry) - 6/22/2011 3:31:17 PM
Cela, Fee is right, this is One of your best! Always, Deborah

Solstice (Poetry) - 6/11/2011 6:02:05 AM
Never read a doomed love affair written quite like this. Excellent!

Solstice (Poetry) - 6/10/2011 4:37:09 PM
This is excellant Cela as anyone who has known the brilliance of love only to have it wink out. Well of your best. fee

Path (Poetry) - 5/14/2011 5:17:45 PM
Excellent lines in this piece Cela...very artistically done with good imagery. Amor

Path (Poetry) - 5/8/2011 8:21:03 AM
Cela, Welcome back! Sad, but an excellent write! Always, Deborah

Path (Poetry) - 5/8/2011 7:33:09 AM
So much thought in so few lines. These I enjoy, and TY for sharing.

Path (Poetry) - 5/7/2011 3:34:54 PM
THIS is a great write, Cela. I feel I am among the greats as I read and re-read this work of art. Depressing? Of course. Look out your window. Watch television (I don't). The world and everyone in it is falling apart. So this sad love poem can be juxtaposed to relate to the world . . . "and eyes of wood that cannot see, / this endless trek of misery." Yes.

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 7:43:38 AM
Cela, A terrible break-up with such emotion... Always, Deborah

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 4/2/2011 3:32:57 PM
Sad but very well expressed...\fee

Forest of Darkness (Poetry) - 3/12/2011 6:05:11 PM
Although dark, rich with emotions and raw feelings... fee

Waiting (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 4:07:31 AM
this is so lovely Cela and with every line of deep emotion a pleasure to read & also to feel Love & Blessings Vickie

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 4:05:32 AM
your dark poetic voice haunts inside the "Dark Forest" a whisper beyond the sorrows because of the trees Love & Light Vickie

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 3:48:42 PM
The sun like the future is always just around or over the horizon. We cab choose to stay forever in the shade and shadows but to live we must also venture forth and dance in the sunlight. Great job here Cela. fee

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/21/2011 3:44:57 AM
POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/20/2011 9:06:17 AM
Cela, It's funny how so many of us are writing about feeling lonely, depressed in darkness, we desperately all need the spring to come. Your poem is immaculate and powerful. Very well written, Peace, love and light, Amber

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 10:56:20 PM
Cela, Excellent! Deborah

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 1:23:17 PM
Thought provoking done extremely well. Namaste Tony

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 1:06:29 PM
Seems both of us dwelled on the "dark" today. In your poem you made the case for loneliness quite dramatic.

Dark Forest (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 12:17:31 PM
Dark and compelling verses, Cela. Very effective in creating the mood. Love and best wishes, Regis

Waiting (Poetry) - 2/6/2011 2:52:21 PM
Haunting and full of sorrow, yet so beautifully written! Christine

Waiting (Poetry) - 2/4/2011 8:05:15 PM
Cela, Simply beautiful, what more can I SAY! Always, Deborah

Winter's Monster (Poetry) - 12/5/2010 8:22:55 AM
I 2nd Tony Cela this wintry snow storm is outstanding in presence chilling our bones Ice Castles Vickie

Winter's Monster (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 7:34:57 AM
Wow, this poem was outstanding. I just took a 2 minute walk outside and then the cold got into my old body. I like your style of writing. Namaste Tony

Abandoned (Poetry) - 11/21/2010 7:17:37 PM
Oh, for that which was and is no more, we mourn ... forever, I fear. Keenly felt by this reader. ~Elizabeth

Autumn's Demise (Poetry) - 11/18/2010 2:50:40 AM
Delightful poem, Cela

Autumn's Demise (Poetry) - 11/12/2010 11:42:33 PM
Excellent expression and imagery, Cela.

Autumn's Demise (Poetry) - 11/12/2010 9:29:17 AM
I love your descriptions, "her icy fingers crumbling hopes to dust" Keep up the good work! Always, Deborah

Without a Trace (Poetry) - 11/12/2010 4:02:48 AM
Cela this is such an outstanding emotional piece your closing line is gripping!! Chiseled In Stone Vickie

Autumn's Demise (Poetry) - 11/12/2010 4:00:00 AM
your poetic voice is beautiful Cela Wintry Prisms Vickie

Autumn's Demise (Poetry) - 11/12/2010 12:37:11 AM
Hi Cela, It is my honor to read you. I liked this poem because of it's vivacity,and refreshment. I am a first time reader of yours but it will not be the last. Namaste Tony

Without a Trace (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 7:49:41 PM
I find your verses most compelling, Cela; and I can relate to the sentiments expressed therein. Love and peace to you, Regis

Autumn's Demise (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 7:48:28 PM
A lovely visual rendition of my favorite season, Cela. Thank you. Love and best wishes, Regis

Without a Trace (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 8:27:20 PM
Cela, Wow! Many favorite lines---"sleeping in a waking nightmare." Always, Deborah

Road (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 8:23:44 PM
Cela, A dark poem---favorite line---"as teardrops bleed into the earth." Always, Deborah

Without a Trace (Poetry) - 11/7/2010 6:08:02 PM
Feeling and giving love this deeply to someone that does not deserve it, can hurt this much. I have been there, Cela, I know this pain you speak of. It makes it very difficult to love someone again. I am happy to say that I have been able to love deeply once again. It took four years of my life, to finally rid the demons. I send you healing energy and wish for you much, peace, love and light, Amber

Without a Trace (Poetry) - 11/4/2010 7:58:52 PM
Heart rendering lines of pain. Well written piece.

Without a Trace (Poetry) - 11/4/2010 7:00:19 PM
Powerful and so heart-breakingly meaningful! Christine

Road (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 1:47:53 PM
this is a most exquisite dark poem within the shadows of emotion Old Stones & Gravel Pits Vickie

Road (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 11:15:51 AM
Cela, Tbis is extremely haunting. So much darkness within each line. Hope all is well in your world.. Peace, love and light, Amber

End of Summer (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 2:47:08 AM
Cela this poem surrenders me your emotion is spoken with such beautiful visuals You last stanza is fabulous! Desires can be so much stronger than our will Love's Bounty Vickie

End of Summer (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 10:26:15 AM
Absolutely stunning poetry! Such imagery that lures you in. Peace, love and light, Amber

Pulse (Poetry) - 9/30/2010 12:06:56 AM
Well written, and good layout, Cela

Pulse (Poetry) - 9/15/2010 11:24:12 AM
Cela your words & emotion penetrate! Such Vivid Depths Filling Empty Spaces With Love Vickie

Pulse (Poetry) - 9/14/2010 10:25:52 AM
Such a haunting love poem. I have had all of these same feelings, Cela, but trust me, it does get easier...A new love will begin to rebuild your heart. Wishing you many days of peace, love and light, Amber

Pulse (Poetry) - 9/14/2010 1:34:11 AM
Intense pain in each line... fee

Pulse (Poetry) - 9/13/2010 8:27:35 PM
Truly poignant and soul-gripping in emotion and meaning expressed, Cela. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 9/10/2010 7:21:27 PM
Cela, Wow! The words, the flow all fits together! Always, Deborah

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 10:04:04 PM
Great flow and I love the title and imagery.

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 9/8/2010 12:40:16 PM
knowing soon all hope will fade, from this futile dream I've made. THIS has definitely 'hit home' exceptional saving this ..thank you Cela! Blessings, Vesna

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 9/8/2010 2:14:27 AM
A delightful poem, Cela

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 9/6/2010 8:43:08 AM
Beautiful writing sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugsss

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 9/6/2010 8:24:47 AM
Exquisite poem! I know the feeling ~ you have written it well! Blessings, Christine

Violet Skies (Poetry) - 9/6/2010 6:00:31 AM
Spoken so softly, it made my heart ache for my soulmate..This is tenderly stunning poetry! Peace, love and light, Amber

Deserted (Poetry) - 8/22/2010 7:25:19 AM
Deeply wounded and forever scarred..The journey of healing is a very long and lonely road..I have been there, it too all my energy sometime, to just get up and eat breakfast..I can relate to every line and every image you show through your sensitive poem... Much peace, love and light, Amber "V"

Shackled (Poetry) - 8/20/2010 2:24:31 AM
shackled chains me! your poetic heart infuses the darkness and enlightens the emotionality of the soul Love & Balms of Rose Oil Vickie

Entombed (Poetry) - 8/20/2010 2:22:02 AM
The somber beauty of dark poetry is such a favorite of mine to read and to feel and also to write Thank You for vising me so that I could discover you & read you too... Hello New Den Sister I like your work Love's Tomb...Always Alive Vickie

Deserted (Poetry) - 8/20/2010 2:18:32 AM
I know this poem and the depths this is rich with meaning for me especially reading the emotion from another soul... May Love's Bounty Always Embrace You Vickie

Deserted (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 9:41:58 PM
Your verses stir deeply in my soul and their meaning echoes there. This reminds me once again that when it comes to love gone awry, it is not true that "time heals all wounds." Thank you for sharing, Cela. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Marooned (Poetry) - 8/4/2010 2:32:13 AM
Intensly dark and deep but very well written with just the right blend of excitment, eeriness and mystery... fee

Solace (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 1:26:35 AM
Powerfully written, Cela

Solace (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 7:31:11 AM
This is so sad but very soothing at the same time. Nicely done, Cela. Much peace, love and light, Amber "V"

Shreds of Moonlight (Poetry) - 6/16/2010 8:16:24 AM
The darkness (and the moon) are often powerful sources of inspiration. You have shared the ambiance very effectively via your verses here, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Angeline Again (Poetry) - 6/16/2010 8:09:30 AM
Dark and intriguing; thank you for sharing, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Arachnid (Poetry) - 6/3/2010 4:03:45 AM
Excellent piece, Cela

Shreds of Moonlight (Poetry) - 5/26/2010 3:52:17 AM
You have really captured the atmosphere, Cela

Shreds of Moonlight (Poetry) - 5/25/2010 11:32:23 AM
Words full of meaning that linger long beyond and within the walls of the heart and mind fond memories remain... Be always safe, Karen

Shreds of Moonlight (Poetry) - 5/25/2010 6:15:43 AM
-----and moonbeams will make thier way into you life to stay the moonlight will once again send out its silvery sheen the dark night of the soul to end--replacing spaces where sorrow had been

Shreds of Moonlight (Poetry) - 5/25/2010 3:58:51 AM
I dread nighttime and sleeping mostly all the time, but when the moon shines it is better for me too.

Shreds of Moonlight (Poetry) - 5/24/2010 7:33:28 PM
Life does go on, the heart does remember but it also can soar with new possibilities. This poem is bittersweet, filled with regrets, memories of lost love, and still shines through with shreds of moonlight to enlighten this wounded heart. Lovely piece of poetry, Cela, I enjoyed reading it. Much peace, love, and light, Amber "V"

Twilight (Poetry) - 5/8/2010 9:19:33 PM
I find the concepts that you share and the imagery that you use as a backdrop very effective and engaging, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

In Memorium (Poetry) - 4/16/2010 3:22:00 AM
Dark but still impacts the reader and leads to thought...almost "Poe" in nature. Well done. fee

In Memorium (Poetry) - 4/15/2010 8:26:36 PM
while each hungry worm is feasting, on the flesh of memories past, spawned by love...which could not last. I find these verse to "echo" in the depth of my soul, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Nightmares (Poetry) - 3/26/2010 10:52:30 AM
Soul-gripping verses, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Nightmares (Poetry) - 3/26/2010 3:30:37 AM
Sad but with such raw real emotions that the reader feels your hurt as if it were shared between two souls. fee

Siren (Poetry) - 3/17/2010 10:40:12 AM
Deep and dark and dripping with the hint of danger and unspoken things...perhaps unspoken for a good reason... fee

Winter's Passage (Poetry) - 3/16/2010 5:32:55 PM
Winter's moods can indeed be a source of inspiration as you've clearly shown here, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Siren (Poetry) - 3/16/2010 5:31:05 PM
There is a nice flow to this poem because of the rhyme and rhythm that you have used, Cela. Also, your words give the reader pause for thought. Thank you. Love and best wishes, Regis

Winter's Passage (Poetry) - 3/10/2010 6:07:16 AM
Hi Cela, The last verse really captures the ambiance of winter. Great write... thank you for sharing... In Spirit, Bear

Winter's Passage (Poetry) - 3/10/2010 1:47:06 AM
It is often amazing that winter with it's first feathery dusting of white purifying snow at the onset seems to turn into a hateful, angry monster depriving us of life at the end...good capture Cela Fee

Relentless Passage (Poetry) - 2/28/2010 6:30:01 AM
Great poem.I enjoy reading it.take care

Relentless Passage (Poetry) - 2/24/2010 3:40:06 PM
excellent write Cela always ejoy your poetry Love & peace William

Relentless Passage (Poetry) - 2/24/2010 3:14:45 PM
Regret and loss seldom shine, Cela, but they do here because you don't torture us but nudge us into a mood with delicate natural yet personal images. Yes! John

Relentless Passage (Poetry) - 2/24/2010 11:02:50 AM
This poem melts with the ice of Winter, on soil that will bear Springs blossoms. George C.

Abandoned (Poetry) - 2/20/2010 3:01:08 PM
A chill went through me as I read this poem(ghosts of lovers past). Your poetry seems as if it's from another time. Stunning melancholia... Lin

Abandoned (Poetry) - 2/19/2010 4:28:16 PM will we all, Cela. A thoughtful write. John

Destination (Poetry) - 2/12/2010 10:28:55 PM
I'm always late and it's not a bad thing. Patrick

Drowning (Poetry) - 2/12/2010 10:25:42 PM
Welcome Cela. Very spooky. Patrick

Drowning (Poetry) - 2/11/2010 5:18:46 PM
deep and dark, yes, but there is hope here, too, the springer eternal. Welcome to AD, Cela, and thanks to Lin for putting me in touch with your work. John

Destination (Poetry) - 2/10/2010 2:56:51 PM
Inspiring write, Cela. Anna

Drowning (Poetry) - 2/10/2010 2:54:29 PM
Deep and dark, and very intriguing....Love your phrasing...well done! Anna

Drowning (Poetry) - 2/10/2010 1:26:11 PM
I find your verses darkly compelling and engaging, Cela. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes, Regis

Destination (Poetry) - 2/10/2010 9:47:35 AM
Again, I really like the cadence here. Good job. Carol

Drowning (Poetry) - 2/10/2010 9:44:58 AM
Hi, Cela--Welcome to Authors Den. Heard about you from Lin Figgins. Love the rhythm and the imagery. Great picture, too. Carol

Drowning (Poetry) - 2/10/2010 9:34:04 AM
As I read your poem, I'm listening to B.B. King's "All Over Again". This has the feel of a good blues tune, Cela. All it needs is a hook! "...a thousand souls"? Try millions. Lost love is torture. And you have penned it well!! Blessings, Lin

Destination (Poetry) - 2/6/2010 10:12:28 AM
Some of the world's greatest genius has been by "latecomers". Many people don't come into their own until later life. Do appreciate this wonderful poem, Cela! Lin

Bedroom (Poetry) - 1/30/2010 4:50:01 PM
Cela, Sad, but you have your readers feeling those emotions as you felt writing them. Deborah

Angeline-2 (Poetry) - 1/30/2010 3:35:43 PM
What a mood you create. Refined expression of melancholia in this softly haunting write. Love the way you personify "her". Fine work, Cela! Blessings, Lin

Angeline-2 (Poetry) - 1/29/2010 7:10:51 PM
Darkly compelling; a lot like the sea at times. Very effective, Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

Angeline-2 (Poetry) - 1/29/2010 4:34:17 PM
A sad haunting quality to this one...well done. fee

Sleepwalk (Poetry) - 1/22/2010 2:01:08 AM
Very well spoken as you seem to be letting mind and heart wander through the shadows...perhaps seeking for something lost or yet to be found. fee

Sleepwalk (Poetry) - 1/21/2010 6:17:08 PM
Somber, dark, and very compelling because you have very effectively recreated the mood (ambiance), Cela. Love and best wishes, Regis

The Hallway (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 3:29:44 PM
Appreciate feedback, Charlie. However, I am Cela. Cela writes Cela's poetry, and no one elses. The expressions are very dark and deep messages from a place I do not fully understand. The products,which are words, and their placement, are merely incidental.

Bedroom (Poetry) - 12/31/2009 11:26:23 AM
an excellent Dark poetic piece Most enjoyable read Love & peace be with you Happy New Year William

Bedroom (Poetry) - 12/30/2009 8:44:09 AM
Dark and sad but yet the very simple message that your heart is still beating means that you are still capable of feeling and giving love...may sweet dreams soon find you Cela... fee

Shadows Falling (Poetry) - 12/27/2009 12:22:37 PM
your soul embraces these beautiful lines a lovely poem Cela! Peace & Inspirations Vickie

Darkness Binds Me (Poetry) - 12/27/2009 12:20:43 PM
Cela Welcome To Authors Den I also like dark poetic expressions (read ur bio) and this piece here dances within all the innate beauty of the ebony night... Peace & Inspirations Vickie

Darkness Binds Me (Poetry) - 12/25/2009 11:59:07 AM
Your words always seem to "grab me by the soul," Cela. The typo with "it's" in the last verse threw me off a little. I'm pretty sure that you mean to write "its" which is the possessive. Thank you for sharing your creative spirit. Love and best wishes, Regis

Darkness Binds Me (Poetry) - 12/24/2009 10:40:34 PM
Depth, insight, powerful. Liz

Dark Emily... (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 7:16:58 PM
So darkly compelling, Cela. So very well done. Love and best wishes, Regis

Darkest Moon (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 7:15:46 PM
Wonderfully done, Cela. Your verses flow like a dark and mysterious stream that compels the reader to come closer... ...closer. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis

The Hallway (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 7:13:37 PM
Your verses have reached into my soul, Cela. This poem is gripping. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes, Regis

The Hallway (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 4:40:58 PM
Hi, This is my first time reading you. It is my honor. This piece was extremely well written. I also thought the content was interesting though dark. GOD BLESS Tony Nerone

The Window (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 10:55:56 AM
mesmerizing words and how you express them Upon the black parchment before you. Peace be with you William

Shadows Falling (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 10:52:53 AM
Your poetry is utterly beautiful A true pleasure to read Peace be with you. William

Angeline (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 10:49:20 AM
a hell of a write I love the way you express your thoughts so poetically Peace be with you William

Dark Emily... (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 10:46:00 AM
an awesome write Cela Peace be with you William

Darkest Moon (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 10:43:25 AM
an excellent write Cela Peace be with you William

Darkest Moon (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 5:55:50 AM
I like the forlorn yet almost acceptance of this theme. You capture lonely so well. fee

Dark Emily... (Poetry) - 12/5/2009 9:12:59 AM
Ahhhh the demons we all face from time to time that speak of our pain and sorrows like knives cutting bring this to life in your work.... fee

Angeline (Poetry) - 12/4/2009 5:46:25 PM
Your picture and the subtle intensity of this write bring out the worst and best of the subject...Angeline and leaves the reader intiqued and wanting more. Well done Cela. fee

Shadows Falling (Poetry) - 12/1/2009 3:43:03 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

The Window (Poetry) - 11/29/2009 2:04:33 AM
Great poem,excellent work.take care

The Window (Poetry) - 11/28/2009 7:58:56 AM
Nice :-)use of words, great job

Labyrinthe (Poetry) - 11/27/2009 9:51:24 AM
a profound piece enjoyed Love & peace be with you William

The Hallway (Poetry) - 11/27/2009 9:46:42 AM
Your journey through the slanted narrow hall Reminds me of those old tenement dwellings of old in my youth, I used to fear walking through..... Excellent write Love & peace be with you William

Buried Alive (Poetry) - 11/27/2009 9:41:37 AM
A well written poem.take care

Buried Alive (Poetry) - 11/27/2009 9:41:30 AM
Sad Yet Written From the Heart Love & Peace be with you William

Labyrinthe (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 8:02:04 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments.

Buried Alive (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 4:45:15 PM
From the title to the close this speaks to me. We get called upon to mourn. I didn't want to be a professional. John

The Hallway (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 1:46:12 PM
A well written poem.take care

Labyrinthe (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 1:44:49 PM
Powerful and strong poem.take care

Labyrinthe (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 8:32:20 PM
Sometimes relationships can be hazardous and that is always sad, very deep and heartwrenching write... Be always safe, Karen

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