Recent Reviews for Lalita Vasu
Divine Perfection (Short Story) - 11/27/2014 9:07:30 AM|
Nice storyline. Enjoyed reading Lalita.
Under a strong spell (Short Story) - 10/13/2014 12:26:53 PM
Lalita, you reached out nicely on this spiritual premise.
Under a strong spell (Short Story) - 10/6/2014 4:20:57 AM
It's very nice to believe that a loved one came from "another world," making them very special.
Well-written. But I don't understand why they were in a cold desert and then came upon a forest. Deserts usually don't have forests.
Siddharth (Short Story) - 9/1/2014 2:23:10 AM
Nice one Lalita. Enjoyed reading and visualising.
Entwined Destinies (Short Story) - 8/7/2014 5:17:26 AM
Enjoyed reading the story. I liked the way it looks positively at the issues that are still stigmatised by the society; e.g. girl being mangalik. Marrying her and then 10 years down the line, happily being together gives pleasant feeling. Based on a real life incident, it certainly has a dramatic twist!
Entwined Destinies (Short Story) - 8/1/2014 8:07:15 AM
Office disturbances often happen this way. Especially when there are affections involved. I have found that even eyewitness accounts of incidents are sometimes wrong because people have strange perceptions of what they see. Jumping to conclusions on hearsay is always dangerous.
Your story has a nice ending with everyone turning out happier.
Facebooked! (Short Story) - 5/29/2014 9:07:51 AM
This had a 'feel good' feeling to it. I really enjoyed it. Most of my Facebook friends are either co-workers, old high school friends, and I just reconnected with two people I haven't seen or heard from in over 40 years! I had a co-worker whose son's name was Ashish. He is from Gujarati, India. Ever hear of it?
In Defence of Love (Short Story) - 12/6/2013 6:45:33 AM
Lalita, This is your best one yet!!!
In Defence of Love (Short Story) - 12/5/2013 1:54:11 PM
a wonderful stoty told so well
The Language of Love (Short Story) - 11/4/2013 5:23:38 AM
Lalita, In a strange land, with a different language, love is always the common denominator. Well done...
Intoxicated by coffee (Short Story) - 10/8/2013 4:42:06 AM
Lalita, This would make a great movie stretched out.
Intoxicated by coffee (Short Story) - 10/5/2013 8:03:00 AM
Intoxicated by coffee (Short Story) - 10/4/2013 2:24:23 AM
Love is no accident (Short Story) - 8/19/2013 8:05:08 AM
a fine story very well done
Love is no accident (Short Story) - 8/19/2013 3:58:48 AM
I Love your short stories. They give me ideas for novels.
Love is no accident (Short Story) - 8/18/2013 6:29:40 AM
Interesting story. I can relate to a woman left by the wayside, dreaming of an earlier acquaintance that has become her fixation.
You could flesh the story out of little bit more, especially what Varun's illness actually was.
The bond of love (Short Story) - 7/30/2013 9:53:22 AM
Loved the ending... nice job.
Unfinished Masterpiece (Short Story) - 7/2/2013 6:28:05 AM
Lalita, Another short story concept that you encapsulate so well.
Unfinished Masterpiece (Short Story) - 6/24/2013 8:41:19 AM
no need to tell anyone
All the world is a stage (Short Story) - 9/30/2012 10:34:42 AM
Once again, you have come up with a creative plot to tell your story.
East meets East (Short Story) - 7/21/2012 9:37:20 AM
You are teaching me Indian legend and words with every story. I do enjoy the adventures you so easily create.
Kannan vs Kannan (Short Story) - 4/2/2012 10:24:14 AM
I didn't expect that ending. I thought an arranged marriage for both of them is something they really need. J
PS. I like your new Picture.
Yesterday Once More (Short Story) - 12/8/2011 9:16:57 PM
I liked 'Yesterday Once More' - a very touching tale of a walk down memory lane to recapture an unforgetable experience boldy narrated.
Yesterday Once More (Short Story) - 11/24/2011 7:24:06 AM
I liked this idea of the visit to the past.
Friendship, Thine Other Name is Love (Short Story) - 8/6/2011 2:22:01 PM
lovely, very lovely. i love the sharing of culture which everyone can understand...hopefully to bring everyone just a bit closer.
If my Dad knew (Poetry) - 2/23/2013 11:28:47 PM
I am so sorry for your loss. Writing helps to heal ones soul. I'm sure your dad is very proud of you!...You are in my prayers....M
If my Dad knew (Poetry) - 1/29/2012 10:20:57 AM
We send our condolences, and encourage you to write more.
If my Dad knew (Poetry) - 1/26/2012 7:39:03 AM
Try to not focus on regrets. Instead focus on the good times and the happy days. I'm sure your dad was proud of you for all that you were to him. Remember him with love and joy.
If my Dad knew (Poetry) - 1/25/2012 5:11:45 PM
be happy to have know that reassuring smile ... when i told my father i wrote poetry (was 14 at the time) he got upset, thought i was becoming a homosexual ...
If my Dad knew (Poetry) - 1/25/2012 11:36:41 AM
I can tell from your description that your father would have welcomed your writing.
My father wanted me to do many things and I did. However, he knew that I wrote, but never read what I wrote. Finally, in the last two years of his life, my mother made him read my novels (no threats, just gentle nudging). He never said anything about my books, but I was glad he got to read them.
No need to feel sorry. Life is full of missed opportunities. We just have to move on and take advantage of the next opportunity–your mother?