Recent Reviews for Susan C Porteous
For My Love (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 1:37:40 PM|
this was cute hope he accepts the valentines day great hilarious write nice images to of those granny drawers uggghhhhhLOL
For My Love (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 11:07:39 AM
Fantastic Susan ...I love it and I bet he will too!
For My Love (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 10:11:02 AM
"Your cute butt, tattoos and baby blue eyes,
Send shivers of longing down to my thighs,
You'd better be ready this Valentines Day,
'Cos it's you and me lover, who are going to play ! "
Glowing Embers (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 9:37:39 AM
"The flickering flame illuminant
From that fireplace nigrescent,
Warming body, soul and mind
Allowing time to unwind."
Dust (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 9:32:37 AM
A-Z animal 4-liners (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 9:26:04 AM
wow...i really enjoyed this write...this is wonderful write...BHUWAN
Entwined and forever free (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 9:25:23 AM
Charity (Poetry) - 12/1/2002 11:21:37 AM
What a beautiful voice, the voice of charity. It is the youthful singing and giving and doing for others that makes the most lasting impression on all of us. Bill Murray
Charity (Poetry) - 12/1/2002 6:20:05 AM
This Grandfather's eyes grew moist. Thank you for the memories.
On another level, thank you for reminding us that true charity is it's own dulcet ode.
OK being me (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 7:45:51 PM
I've finally found out I like being myself also, it took me over 40 years!! :)
Charity (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 7:43:58 PM
Wonderful, very "dulcet" yourself in your lovely piece, Susan!
The Rave in Miller's Cave (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 11:13:36 AM
hahahaha, come out from under that duvet!
The Rave in Miller's Cave (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 6:23:53 PM
Heeeheeeheee!!!!!.....This was very interesting!!!!!.....
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Henry the Eighth (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 7:00:14 PM
A poem and history, too! I love it. Great subject.
Acrostics (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 4:34:34 AM
Lovely pieces of writing here. They've all got something in common with each other. Great write!
Dead-Person-Mud-Pie (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 10:56:14 AM
:) but a valuable lesson therein...i shall let sleeping hippos lie. cute write, with valuable information! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Metasim Phoricilies (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 4:29:42 AM
ah this is great stuff Soozie, you hit the nail on the head here!
Metasim Phoricilies (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 6:35:47 PM
Great advice! I like this one!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Thankful For (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 11:50:13 AM
Yes dear, you come though as a shining soul in a universe of tears. I too feel this way more and more the older I grow. "Look to this day, for it is the very breath of life."
I forget who wrote this. Bill ((hugs))
Thankful For (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 7:07:35 AM
Nice theme. I like positive people. Nice write.
Thankful For (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 6:05:32 AM
How striking this piece is, resounding deeply as I feel this thankfulness of yours, more and more as I grow older. It is such an enveloping feeling, hugged close and cherished, added to and ever-growing...thank you, Susan, you've written "it" so well!
Uninvited Houseguest (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 2:28:27 PM
we have some little mice at our work, too; and i've seen 'em once in a while; i don't like mice! sure wish i still had "cajun", my cat; she was a champion mouser (although she was more apt to PLAY with them than eat them)! love, your mice phobic friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Uninvited Houseguest (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 1:21:34 PM
Don't waste your breath lecturing the nimble mouse. Give those five lazy cats a good scolding.
Uninvited Houseguest (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 11:10:43 AM
Sooooo cute!!!! Good write
Uninvited Houseguest (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 7:20:54 AM
You have to lay down the law when it comes to those pesky rodents. As long as he heeds your rules, then there's no problem. Lovely write.
Me and my duvet (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 2:12:31 PM
A wonderful write, Susan. It is strange, is it not, the forms in which our muse manifests?
Me and my duvet (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 12:01:56 PM
me too..mine has a cute doggie cover too....
its funny where you get inspiration from isnt it....hehehehe
cosy write me dear.
Me and my duvet (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 10:51:39 AM
Number 1951 (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 10:10:49 AM
crumbs Susan, you should not have had to put up with this. My heart feels heavy for you.
You know where I am if you need a chat.
Seasons (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 3:33:30 AM
is it me, or does this year seem to be one of the most colourful Autumns for a long time?....dratt, its me.
My Secret Admirer (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 3:30:36 AM
Hahahahaha...mmm pleasure or pain. What to do? You could set up a survalence spot from across the road or just peep from behind net curtains...how exciting. Actually I am really jealous, never had a secret admirer in my life...
I bet it wasnt a female!
Great write Susan its lovely to read something different.
Seasons (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 4:34:13 PM
Great style and rhymings!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Taking ABC a step further (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 11:34:26 AM
creative and fascinating piece! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Taking ABC a step further (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 10:38:38 AM
creative and fantastic! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Taking ABC a step further (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 7:15:48 AM
What an excellant creative poem..........you are the tops!
Taking ABC a step further (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 5:26:55 AM
LOL! I loved this! Very creative. I was wondering what words you would come up with for Q, V, X and Z. I've got no idea what that Q word means, maybe i'll look it up.
Great fun stuff!
Number 1951 (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 3:54:14 PM
Number 1951 (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 3:47:26 PM
my heart broke as i read these lines
may you find peace
Blues and Twos Trilogy (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 10:09:14 AM
Wonderful rythmn and flow along with a good message!
Blues and Twos Trilogy (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 12:15:47 AM
What would we do without them? Bill
Blues and Twos Trilogy (Poetry) - 10/22/2002 7:23:55 PM
Lovely tribute to life's heroes...
Ode to my PC (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 1:44:44 PM
lets hope the fever and shivers have now vanished and you can settle down in front of your newly aquired screen in fine fetal.
I know exactly what you mean.
Beauty (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 1:42:02 PM
Soozie, you have said it all here. This is a lovely poem. I had the most beautiful older sister to wipe my nose in it too. People always tell me that my crazy personality is worth more..........I hate that!....hehehehe
Beauty (Poetry) - 10/19/2002 6:08:52 PM
the body is where we are temporarily docked in... each harbor had its own beauty...
Beauty (Poetry) - 10/19/2002 11:50:13 AM
You are all the good tht everyone has in them. And the negative just rolls off. And that is the way it should be. There are no suprior bings. We are equal and when we die we sure prove it. Bill
Beauty (Poetry) - 10/19/2002 9:26:22 AM
susan, this is a good write with a good message in it!! well done!! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Beauty (Poetry) - 10/19/2002 9:24:05 AM
The real beauty lay inside the soul that cares....A wonderful write. I agree...Ty, Dani
Beauty (Poetry) - 10/19/2002 9:13:42 AM
That is so true. Our inner self (soul) is only carried around in this vehicle we call a body. Just think of Mel Gibson, or Meryl Streep dringina clapped out old Chevy. They're still MeThat'smy vie of life anyway. Take cae.l Gibson and Meryl Streep.
I was your friend (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 7:51:16 AM
Bravo Susan. This is excellent. The raw emotion of your feelings in poured into every word.
Ode to my PC (Poetry) - 10/16/2002 9:30:30 AM
Bravo! I love this.
Ode to my PC (Poetry) - 10/15/2002 10:04:41 AM
very witty and true
where oh where would we be
glad your up and running
Ode to my PC (Poetry) - 10/15/2002 9:59:35 AM
glad you got a new pc!! since gettin' on the net, i feel the need to write; it's like an *addiction* to me!! :) (don't have my own pc; use the library's!!) great write!! love, your (writin' fool of a) friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Our Jungle Friends (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 1:36:32 PM
i love animals...especially jungle animals. and i loved this write! :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Our Jungle Friends (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 10:07:09 AM
aDORable write!! thoroughly enjoyed this!!
Our Jungle Friends (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 6:52:12 AM
my favourite kind of poem...I loved this.
Three thousand miles (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 1:33:32 AM
Lovely tribute. Well crafted and sweet. ~E
Fun (Poetry) - 9/29/2002 12:58:12 PM
That's why we stand in line!! Very Good!
Fun (Poetry) - 9/29/2002 9:39:48 AM
Why do they do it ? (Poetry) - 9/29/2002 6:31:49 AM
There is nothing in this world as distant as depression. And it is hidden well behind many many masks. And I wore several of those masks for many years. But like the person in this poem, God wasn't ready for me to die yet, and He reached down from Heaven and neutralized all 50 of those sleeping pills I shoved down my throat. That was a very long time ago,,almost seems like a lifetime has passed since then. But when I came up out of that dark hole, I promised not only myself but God as well, that I would never let myself go there again,,and I haven't. But unfortuneatly some don't get that second chance. I'm truly sorry for your friend,,Lisa
Why do they do it ? (Poetry) - 9/29/2002 6:28:56 AM
Been there Susan--suicide affects those who are left behind. Too many unanswered questions. Sometimes we just want to stop the world and get off for a while...BUT..tomorrow is always another day.