black haze (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 9:01:52 AM
Teg!!...very powerful poem!!!...
love the ending!!!
hugs to you my friend
black haze (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 11:15:25 PM
ah as I simply drift away"
great ending I liked this poem....
darkness fade to black (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 6:59:07 PM
Excellent piece--really caught me by surprise, so that when I read it the second
time I was looking for more journey leading
to the climactic end! Vicky
darkness fade to black (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 5:17:44 PM
wow very very nice....love the imagination in this(it could be my imagination)
great write anyway
darkness fade to black (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 4:31:26 PM
... i believe that it is recognition of our imperfections which make us poets; that and great courage. your poem shows a mature mix of both!
fall of an idol (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 12:07:03 AM
this is an interesting piece
most people are not what they seem
fall of an idol (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 7:49:43 PM
Great write. Can relate to those feelings.. As do a lot of people.
Protective Storms (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 5:00:42 PM
Teg my friend
glad you came out of your room to talk to me...as usual I love your images...
fall of an idol (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 4:59:06 PM
Teg my dear
nice work...i like the images
fall of an idol (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 2:16:01 PM
You certainly do have a way with words! I will be visiting more often to see if you have posted! Both of your poems spoke to places deep within my being!
Protective Storms (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 2:11:11 PM
I really love this piece! It is hauntingly familiar to me. I really enjoyed reading it and all the feelings it stirred within me.
Thank you for posting it!
Protective Storms (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 10:32:07 AM
Yes perfection I find here. I related to this for sometimes I think I live in this room. Great write,,,Welcome! Lisa
Protective Storms (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 9:38:09 AM
very deep! full of beautiful imagery!