That Kinda Love (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 1:00:54 PM
Well I kinda like it just the way it is, the ending is perfect, leaves the reader wondering and I think that is a good thing.
The Question (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 4:32:49 PM
the Answer is
The Question (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 1:57:35 PM
good job of sharing
hang in there
The Question (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 10:16:10 AM
Reminds me of a song -fifty ways to leave your lover.
I am hoping this is just writing and not what you are feeling
The Question (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 7:31:29 AM
So sad and deep these feelings you write of...they say "This too will pass"...and from my experience it does get better. Chin up and keep writing...Thank you for sharing.~ Dee
The Question (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 7:30:09 AM
Suicide is for those that have only one person in mind, themselves.
Unknown (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 7:23:50 AM
Life is just a bowl of cherries with seeds.
Unknown (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 7:20:51 AM
Can easily relate to those very same feelings...the dilemma is that this is always on-going, like a game of cat and mouse.The only way to test the waters is to put one foot in....then the other. You've captured these emotions well...!
Is It True? (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 7:10:50 AM
Good- Bye (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 7:05:45 AM
That is no goodbye. Goodbye is I hope before you read this you are struck by a lost seagull on his way to a Gratefull Dead concert.