nightmare (Short Story) - 7/26/2009 2:56:07 PM
That is excellent prose Bree! You built up a wonderful atmosphere and let us feel it in very few words. There are a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing major.
As writers, it is very important that we go over our work very carefully! Keep writing!!
my soul (Poetry) - 7/26/2009 3:01:59 PM
Short but very emotional and powerful imagery. I think poetry is definitely where you excel!! i see a darkness there, but i know where it comes from and poetry is in fact a wonderful way to let our feelings out. I want to see much more :)
killing the world (Poetry) - 7/26/2009 2:59:52 PM
Oh! This is simply divine work Bree! Terrific stuff!!!
light of day (Poetry) - 7/26/2009 2:58:56 PM
Beautifully done! One spelling mistake sweetie - embrace