Recent Reviews for Mo'Kha Uzuri
Nona and Me (for Fabian) (Poetry) - 12/8/2012 4:06:18 PM|
Powerful poem, Mo'Kha! Much is said in this beautiful work,but much more is left unsaid.
Barbara J Henry
The One That Got Away (Poetry) - 8/2/2012 12:53:19 PM
You've created a short story in this exchange. Wonderful.
Glad you've joined us at Authors Den.
Nona and Me (for Fabian) (Poetry) - 8/2/2012 12:44:36 PM
Dear Mo'Kha -
Your poem is so evocative... the sadness is palpable.
Spring (Poetry) - 8/2/2012 12:37:49 PM
Hello, Jo'Kha -
Oh, what a delight. You've captured the sweetness of spring and brought a smile to this reader. Thank you.
untittled (Poetry) - 8/2/2012 12:33:30 PM
Hello, Mo'Kha -
You have led me to your wonderful work by becoming a Fan of mine, as I am now of yours. Thank you. Because you asked: I agree with another reader that your title could easily be 'Oynx Sky'. I would use present tense, saying 'I cried', 'my eyes glared...', 'I mourned'; and begin stanza 2 with 'my heart ached' for continuity of presentation about your feelings. What a beautiful, sad, powerful, hopeful, wonderful poem.
Deep Blessings, Vicky
untittled (Poetry) - 7/31/2009 1:53:11 PM
A cosmic interpretation so artfully written. Why not "onyx sky" to envelop the entirety...
Be always safe,
untittled (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 7:35:40 AM
This is a pale well worked poem.The choice of words is brilliand and the whole thing is pretty strong.I liked it a lot.You handdle words well.Great Job.
The One That Got Away (Poetry) - 7/29/2009 10:40:13 PM
This is very good,take care
Nona and Me (for Fabian) (Poetry) - 7/29/2009 10:38:43 PM
Excellent poem,I enjoy reading your poems.I am looking forward to reading the next one,take care
Spring (Poetry) - 7/29/2009 10:35:48 PM
Great poem,take care
untittled (Poetry) - 7/29/2009 10:34:53 PM
Hi Jhae,welcome to the den.This is a well written poem,take care
untittled (Poetry) - 7/29/2009 6:32:56 PM