The Lady of the Lake (Short Story) - 8/16/2009 4:21:32 PM
Very interesting story. It began as just a run of the mill story about a jealous, someone violent-thinking person at the pregnant woman. But as I kept reading I found the story become very much surreal in nature. I didn't get to finish it because the story got cut off before the ending, but I liked what I read. One thing. Your constant use of the letter "u" for the word "you." What do you do that, even when you need to say you're you put u're. The usage of that letter for the word you is shorthand for emails and things, but when you write a story you really should use the "u."